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I have 1154 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2136160 times and 1168 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1560 of my 15,046 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1592 votes

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Cherry

flockers 4

The day hadn’t started the way I’d hoped. I wasn’t late for work, which would have been a bad thing. But I was late for court, which wasn’t too bad a...
Cherry

flockers 3

Judge Morrie adjourned for lunch. Just as the big cheese advocate said he would. Stood outside on the stone steps with Myra. Lawyers and normal folk...

flockers 2

‘You were in the wrong waiting room.’ The lawyer shook my hand, introduced himself as John Cameron, Charlie’s advocate. ‘I’m sorry,’ Myra apologised...
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Gold cherry

flockers

Nobody expected Charlie Dean to be a success. Big teeth that flashed like butcher’s knives, he had the kind of bully-boy laugh that made you want to...
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the tug boat

The Tug Boat pub was infected by McAllisters. He turned to go before he was spotted, but he made his move too late. ‘Happy Anniversary’ went the war...

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1560 of my comments have received 1592 Great Feedback votes

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enjoyed this. thanks.

Posted on Sun, 26 Oct 2008

enjoyed this. thanks.Read full comment

Posted in Bonnie Prince Charlie and the 1745 Jacobite Rebellion

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I especially liked the first

Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2011

I especially liked the first stanza, but that is maybe that was just my certain boyish impulses. Great stuff Chris. It's not often I'm proud of 'Futility.'Read full comment

Posted in Futility

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evocative. well done.

Posted on Thu, 09 Sep 2010

evocative. well done.Read full comment

Posted in The approach of winter

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Needs a bit of proof reading

Posted on Tue, 09 Mar 2010

Needs a bit of proof reading eg 'She was an attractive and she knew it.' And there is a bit or repetition, you could cut a few hundred words quite easily. A good story, which I enjoyed.Read full comment

Posted in Blood Money

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