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I like this very much, coming
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
I like this very much, coming after Lydeford Gorge made me think of a ghost?
"swirl of billowing white silk floating," I love this!!!
Please could you explain what is devoured by trees? Am too thick, have read several times and can'...
Enjoyed this very much, a great 50th piece :0) I can identify the moon and that's it, everything else is unknowable, vast. Your poem made me think of a huge jewellery box, full of silver chains of orbits and crystal celestial orbs and medallion...
I'm glad you lived life to the full, cramming in as much colour and joy as you could! "thriving energy in this gorge filled with intrigue" is wonderful! I remember always hoping to see ghosts in such places, or go through a portal. Your poem...
I read this right after Onemorething's Wren, what a contrast! You took me straight to a station like a teleport machine, and your poem is so vivid it feels like my own memory now. I liked "shoals or iron" very much, also "thronging multitudes of...
I was into the fifties when read Soldier's Son. Am not at all sure could have stuck with the bleak side of it, nor been as uplifted by the philosophical (?) side of it before then?
Does it? Though won't help you sleep at all, I kept finding it was getting light and the birds were singing :0) I wonder if it will change your poems? The editing is TERRIBLE, but it doesn't matter.
I am longing to talk to someone about Soldier's Son :0) Be warned though, the Fitz books are impossible to put down, only start if you have a holiday. The trouble is after reading her books it is hard to stick to any others? Feel like a drug...
yes, I believe this, too. Belief in the rightness of nature makes all things cling to life, that whatever we suffer now will pass, just as winter does, or rain breaks the chains of drought.
I like this very much, coming
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
I like this very much, coming after Lydeford Gorge made me think of a ghost?
"swirl of billowing white silk floating," I love this!!!
Please could you explain what is devoured by trees? Am too thick, have read several times and can'...
Read full commentPosted in Escape To Freedom
I liked this very much, too.
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
I liked this very much, too. Particularly your description of birch trees. Hope you are well and Spring is coming where you live
Read full commentPosted in The Wind
Enjoyed this very much, a
Posted on Wed, 10 Mar 2021
Enjoyed this very much, a great 50th piece :0) I can identify the moon and that's it, everything else is unknowable, vast. Your poem made me think of a huge jewellery box, full of silver chains of orbits and crystal celestial orbs and medallion...
Read full commentPosted in Black Holes and Revelations
I'm glad you lived life to
Posted on Wed, 10 Mar 2021
I'm glad you lived life to the full, cramming in as much colour and joy as you could! "thriving energy in this gorge filled with intrigue" is wonderful! I remember always hoping to see ghosts in such places, or go through a portal. Your poem...
Read full commentPosted in Lydford Gorge
I read this right after
Posted on Wed, 03 Mar 2021
I read this right after Onemorething's Wren, what a contrast! You took me straight to a station like a teleport machine, and your poem is so vivid it feels like my own memory now. I liked "shoals or iron" very much, also "thronging multitudes of...
Read full commentPosted in New Amsterdam
Another book?!?!
Posted on Wed, 24 Feb 2021
Another book?!?!
I was into the fifties when read Soldier's Son. Am not at all sure could have stuck with the bleak side of it, nor been as uplifted by the philosophical (?) side of it before then?
I am sorry Onemorething to hijack...
Read full commentPosted in The Hive
Does it? Though won't help
Posted on Wed, 24 Feb 2021
Does it? Though won't help you sleep at all, I kept finding it was getting light and the birds were singing :0) I wonder if it will change your poems? The editing is TERRIBLE, but it doesn't matter.
Read full commentPosted in The Hive
I am longing to talk to
Posted on Wed, 24 Feb 2021
I am longing to talk to someone about Soldier's Son :0) Be warned though, the Fitz books are impossible to put down, only start if you have a holiday. The trouble is after reading her books it is hard to stick to any others? Feel like a drug...
Read full commentPosted in The Hive
Thank you for explaining
Posted on Sun, 28 Feb 2021
Thank you for explaining
Read full commentPosted in The Ascent of a Dog Rose
yes, I believe this, too.
Posted on Sun, 28 Feb 2021
yes, I believe this, too. Belief in the rightness of nature makes all things cling to life, that whatever we suffer now will pass, just as winter does, or rain breaks the chains of drought.
I had to look up oscine :0)
Couldn't find...
Read full commentPosted in The Ascent of a Dog Rose
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