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I wonder if it is like the
Posted on Fri, 08 Oct 2021
I wonder if it is like the difference between a solo singer's voice and a choir? Both are beautiful and powerful. I loved your description in the first part
Read full commentPosted in October
I had always thought it was
Posted on Thu, 07 Oct 2021
I had always thought it was to make sure we stay right where they want us?
I think cats need suspense - If a cat sits next to a likely looking hole is a mouse going to come out of that hole? If a cat lies down suddenly in the middle of...
Read full commentPosted in More About Cats
Agree with Jenny! Specially
Posted on Thu, 07 Oct 2021
Agree with Jenny! Specially the beginning. Just the rhythm of this :
"India was snoozing peacefully in her crate, warmed by a handy shaft of autumnal sunshine shining through the kitchen window. She heard, but tried to ignore, the pad,...
Read full commentPosted in From A Dithtanthe!
Brilliant Luigi!!!
Posted on Thu, 07 Oct 2021
Brilliant Luigi!!!
Read full commentPosted in Choice
You are a brilliant poet, can
Posted on Sat, 02 Oct 2021
You are a brilliant poet, can pin down the mist of moods, almost in a sort of collage of trivial things to make something so intimate.
I wish you a happy day tomorrow.
I hope this is not insensitive and ignorant, if you find sugary...
Read full commentPosted in When I'm sad I eat sweets
Oh Penny, this is great! I so
Posted on Sat, 02 Oct 2021
Oh Penny, this is great! I so hope you can keep spinning your story for many many more episodes. The panda details were lovely :0) And the tiny snippets of the person behind all these challenges, and Max, you are revealing them just the right...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 19
"this cold flesh wrapped"
Posted on Thu, 30 Sep 2021
"this cold flesh wrapped"
"suddenly stirs...slips out of sight"
"now swerving into deeper silence"
"feverishly searching / coiled shadowed plants"
"cool eyed glances"
"shyness:wishing for night time"
"...
Read full commentPosted in Stone Loach
Lovely to see another chunk
Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021
Lovely to see another chunk of your wonderful story! You are handling all the strands so deftly.
Is this a typo for assessed ? "Willow stepped out into the late afternoon sunlight and accessed the crowd"
It makes my day to...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 18
Really clever, weaving a
Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021
Really clever, weaving a great description of the caddis fly's environment into a political point, making the metaphor work so well without a hint of rant. Brilliant POD
Read full commentPosted in I, Caddis
enjoyed this, and your word
Posted on Tue, 28 Sep 2021
enjoyed this, and your word play with fly at the end :0) They are amazing, aren't they? Like they make their own mosaics to live in?
Read full commentPosted in Complicated lives of the little creatures!
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