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I have 180 stories published in
2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1041079 times
and 288 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2373 of my 6,684 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2483 votes
You have a wonderful stirring
Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022
You have a wonderful stirring rhythm and create a romantic sense of adventure. Only, at the end, you call her victim and I think of her as heroine?
It's a great accompaninment to the original story!
Read full commentPosted in Leaving The Nest
Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022
Rhiannon, I'm sorry all my replies to you keep being in the wrong order and I cannot sort it!
I agree with both you and Jane?
While I have been with my partner for 20 years we are not married. It is a struggle and we have had some...
Read full commentPosted in unclear nuclear
Your job sounds really grim!
Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022
Your job sounds really grim! I remember feeling like this, you express how at the end of a shift I couldn't wait to go to the woods with my dog and be alive again :0)
I hope things become better for you very soon
I like "softer"...
Read full commentPosted in If I can just get through the day
Oh, my eyes are getting tears
Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022
Oh, my eyes are getting tears in this is so beautiful
Read full commentPosted in Meadowsweet
That WAS abrupt! On a radio
Posted on Fri, 27 May 2022
That WAS abrupt! On a radio program the other day, they were discussing whether it should be required of doctors to be kind. I wonder if your doctor thought she was being kind, I think you were very brilliant to take it so bravely
Read full commentPosted in Janus 13
That was very exciting, start
Posted on Mon, 23 May 2022
That was very exciting, start of a fab children's story
Read full commentPosted in The Castle (1)
Oh! Thankyou Jenny! What a
Posted on Mon, 23 May 2022
Oh! Thankyou Jenny! What a lovely poem you have made, so much more detail - I love "sensations quiver"! You have given your moth a story, a character, I was glad at the end when it had escaped the bat :0)
Read full commentPosted in Luna Moth
"creepfoot to creepfoot" is
Posted on Sun, 22 May 2022
"creepfoot to creepfoot" is perfect, could see one walking instantly :0)
Read full commentPosted in Night Heron
I liked these lines
Posted on Sun, 22 May 2022
I liked these lines particularly, moving from the solidness of reality to the airiness and something from nothing of magic :
"from the vagaries of a stoic’s life.
Where wands make trails of light
like fireflies in an obsidian...
Read full commentPosted in In a Land of Magicians
"Windy tussles" is perfect.
Posted on Sun, 22 May 2022
"Windy tussles" is perfect. also I love the idea of you flying over beautiful forests and water in Canada on your magic carpet, chewing a biro and thinking up your next poem
Read full commentPosted in When I Write
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