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That was great, so intriguing, I felt all the mysteries you found, the questions hanging like smoke. I liked your conversational style very much, too, and how you repeated daggers, and the poem's completion being not about things at all....
Airy it really is, it is one of the best things I have ever been given, ever, I wish I knew how to say Thankyou properly, apart from just writing it over and over again.
Rachel, if you can think of anything I could try to write for you?
am sure have mentioned before, there is a yew planted on the edge of the public garden here, I thought randomly, but read that it might be there that they burned women they called witches. The...
Agree with everyone else,
Posted on Wed, 01 Dec 2021
Agree with everyone else, this :
"Brown bark flaking, a myriad of insects,
industrious bees thriving in a resinous domain,
hawks, jays and owls alive amongst branches,
red squirrels and bats call pines their home."...
Read full commentPosted in Lonesome Pines
"drops caught in the spiders’
Posted on Wed, 01 Dec 2021
"drops caught in the spiders’ webs,
glittering cities built in the night,
threads cast from stem to stem catching
the morning light "
"these jewelled orbs perfectly balanced"
"waiting for the sun’s beam,
...
Read full commentPosted in (This Life) Part 2: Webs
I am going to miss your tree
Posted on Tue, 30 Nov 2021
I am going to miss your tree poems!
Read full commentPosted in Apple
Apples still on the tree are
Posted on Tue, 30 Nov 2021
Apples still on the tree are the best sort of Christmas decoration :0) How birds must miss our old traditions that left fruit unpicked!I
It all has a mystical feel, but I specially liked
"the last fruit hung,
not fallen...
Read full commentPosted in Apple
I like "soft grief" very
Posted on Mon, 29 Nov 2021
I like "soft grief" very much
and the sounds of "lyre Belili or Babylon hush" sound like a beautiful spell
Read full commentPosted in Welig for Paul (marandina)
That was great, so intriguing
Posted on Mon, 29 Nov 2021
That was great, so intriguing, I felt all the mysteries you found, the questions hanging like smoke. I liked your conversational style very much, too, and how you repeated daggers, and the poem's completion being not about things at all....
Read full commentPosted in Debris
Airy it really is, it is one
Posted on Sun, 28 Nov 2021
Airy it really is, it is one of the best things I have ever been given, ever, I wish I knew how to say Thankyou properly, apart from just writing it over and over again.
Rachel, if you can think of anything I could try to write for you?
Read full commentPosted in A Beech poem for Di
Had no idea about the "tall
Posted on Sun, 28 Nov 2021
Had no idea about the "tall and electric" will look that up tonight!
Rachel, it's beautiful, and I love the bits at the bottom too :0) thankyou thankyou thankyou
Read full commentPosted in A Beech poem for Di
OhOhOh! THANKYOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted on Sun, 28 Nov 2021
OhOhOh! THANKYOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Read full commentPosted in A Beech poem for Di
To unknow, that's a great way
Posted on Sat, 27 Nov 2021
To unknow, that's a great way to finish :0)
am sure have mentioned before, there is a yew planted on the edge of the public garden here, I thought randomly, but read that it might be there that they burned women they called witches. The...
Read full commentPosted in Yew
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