Storm clouds rolling in

Cherry

By Penny4athought

Thu, 15 Apr 2021
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12 comments
 

Cold front coming in

Disturbance in the upper atmosphere

Shivers expected

Electrical flashes

Dangerous lightning

Rumbles of thunder over the home front

Take cover in safe spaces

Verbal volleys imminent

Friction in closed quarters looming

Storms calm when tempers drop

Sunshine dissipates frustration

Understanding, seeable on the horizon

Certificate 12
Poem
Humour
Nature

Comments

Submitted by marandina on

I like the intertwining of emotions with the weather. Adeptly done :)

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

thank you Marandina - smiley

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Submitted by Di_Hard on

The comma after understanding is like a deep breath of relief :0) You convey the tension of the atmosphere before very well

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

Hi Di_Hard - yes, the breath of relief is felt when a storm ends- so glad you liked it- smiley

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Submitted by D Marie on

Hey..I've just posted a poem about Rain Clouds and then saw yours. Yours is great and more atmospheric x

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

Thank you D-Marie for your lovely comment-smiley

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I also was impressed by the way the subjects merged! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

What a lovely comment - Thank you Rhiannon-smiley

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

You captured the weather perfectly in this poem Penny.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

Thank you Jenny -smiley

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Submitted by luigi_pagano on

The parallel between meteorological and emotional turbulences is expertly expressed  JoAnne. 

Luigi x

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

HI Luigi- Thank you for reading this little poem of mine and for your very kind comment. So glad you liked it-smiley

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