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I enjoyed this very much. I
Posted on Sat, 04 Apr 2020
I enjoyed this very much. I liked all the different distances the sounds were coming from, and you moving through them, too
That's a good metaphor. I like the idea of readymade entertainment on telly and stuff you make yourself from ingredients to hand, less exotic but more (ful)filling.
Advanced civilisations not having trees, yes! Have noticed that too. We...
I wonder if it will help your Mum, thinking she is back in the war?
I like the feeling of being in a warm glass bubble you have made, floating in the peace, out of the wind. And loved your description of the bumblebee :0)
Sorry to go off topic, but as Rhiannon mentioned children, and I know you have one a bit older than mine, how would you suggest persuading a teenager to get off his computer, where he is with friends, and go out into the fresh air for some...
Oh Brilliant! Thankyou, enjoyed very much, you and your dogs wandering through a ghostly landscape. Liked the detail of the chains on his jacket rattling :0)
You and Airy writing about ghosts, like in the silence it is not only birdsong...
have not done any for decades. These last few weeks, I couldn't write and I almost thought I might. But your poems, I see them as clearly in my mind as when I used to do my own stuff. I am not sure I can anymore, my hands are too stiff. I will...
I enjoyed this very much. I
Posted on Sat, 04 Apr 2020
I enjoyed this very much. I liked all the different distances the sounds were coming from, and you moving through them, too
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That's a good metaphor. I
Posted on Wed, 01 Apr 2020
That's a good metaphor. I like the idea of readymade entertainment on telly and stuff you make yourself from ingredients to hand, less exotic but more (ful)filling.
Advanced civilisations not having trees, yes! Have noticed that too. We...
Read full commentPosted in How Long Can You Stew For, Before You Fall Apart? (3)
I wonder if it will help your
Posted on Thu, 02 Apr 2020
I wonder if it will help your Mum, thinking she is back in the war?
I like the feeling of being in a warm glass bubble you have made, floating in the peace, out of the wind. And loved your description of the bumblebee :0)
And the...
Read full commentPosted in Salty meanderings
Sorry to go off topic, but as
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2020
Sorry to go off topic, but as Rhiannon mentioned children, and I know you have one a bit older than mine, how would you suggest persuading a teenager to get off his computer, where he is with friends, and go out into the fresh air for some...
Read full commentPosted in How Long Can You Stew For, Before You Fall Apart? (2)
this is so gentle, lovely
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2020
this is so gentle, lovely
Read full commentPosted in Moth and Crow
Oh Brilliant! Thankyou,
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2020
Oh Brilliant! Thankyou, enjoyed very much, you and your dogs wandering through a ghostly landscape. Liked the detail of the chains on his jacket rattling :0)
You and Airy writing about ghosts, like in the silence it is not only birdsong...
Read full commentPosted in How Long Can You Stew For, Before You Fall Apart? (2)
:0) You will have a friend
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2020
:0) You will have a friend for life! I loved your poem
Read full commentPosted in Spencer
have not done any for
Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2020
have not done any for decades. These last few weeks, I couldn't write and I almost thought I might. But your poems, I see them as clearly in my mind as when I used to do my own stuff. I am not sure I can anymore, my hands are too stiff. I will...
Read full commentPosted in Starling
Well, if anything gets me
Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2020
Well, if anything gets me making pictures again it is going to be your writing. You are an amazing communicator
Read full commentPosted in Starling
I love startlings, you have
Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2020
I love startlings, you have captured them perfectly!
"an iridescence of speckles
that flirt in green and purple."
"a multitude may merge
as one rise and swell of smoke,
and hidden in your memory - the shadow of...
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