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While flowers and fruit and leaves fall, birds rise calling dawn from horizon's broken shell; song from bare branches brightens silent cold; and soon...
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Your employer should really
Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024
Your employer should really take care of YOU more, that sounds horrible and stressful. As you say, one would think, with the terrible lack of experienced essential workers like you, that they would bend over backwards to keep you. I bet those...
That was great, how you start with the red ring wellies give bare legs! Argh! I had forgotten those, but they were such a big consideration in Summer, weren't they? The Little Mermaid not being able to walk on her new feet would have understood....
Loved this. Eric's PTSD, how he "never rang the bell to stop the bus outside Iceland". Your poem, how the theme interweaves past and present, country and shop, then comes together at the end with fishfingers coming from both kinds of Iceland,...
Oh Luigi, I hope this doesn't happen often! I cook for just me quite a bit as I am the only vegan in our house. If you have an onion, a carrot, tinned tomatoes and baked beans, you might rinse out the sugary sauce the beans come in, and cut up...
Hullo Paul :0) Have huge worries too, not just about genuine green land being built on, but also that the necessary affordable homes are no more likely to be built now than before, because they do not provide the same level of profit?
It is...
Thankyou for sharing this moment, Maxine :0) That was an interesting journey you had today, the stillness to appreciate beautiful designs of spider webs and the next, shock of one-wheeled motorbike racing off!!!
Rhiannon, that sounds horrible! Remember you writing about tooth trouble in Covid, too. Though your poem is fun to read and makes light of what must have been a very grim experience, really glad you are pain free now!
I hope you had a lovely Birthday Jenny, and that this year for you is much, much, much better than last year! I loved the rich images and positivity in this poem, it is GREAT to read this new wonderful writing from you!
Thankyou so much for your wonderful comment Paul, extremely well argued :0) Very sorry I did not realise you had made it, till this afternoon, and then when I did, internet stopped working again
Your employer should really
Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024
Your employer should really take care of YOU more, that sounds horrible and stressful. As you say, one would think, with the terrible lack of experienced essential workers like you, that they would bend over backwards to keep you. I bet those...
Read full commentPosted in ‘D Day’ : Leap Into The Unknown! (Community Care!? Actually) by Alfred N. Muggins (current affairs observer, and undercover reporter!)
That was great, how you start
Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024
That was great, how you start with the red ring wellies give bare legs! Argh! I had forgotten those, but they were such a big consideration in Summer, weren't they? The Little Mermaid not being able to walk on her new feet would have understood....
Read full commentPosted in Tang Hall Beck
Loved this. Eric's PTSD, how
Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024
Loved this. Eric's PTSD, how he "never rang the bell to stop the bus outside Iceland". Your poem, how the theme interweaves past and present, country and shop, then comes together at the end with fishfingers coming from both kinds of Iceland,...
Read full commentPosted in Eric’s War
It has been a long time since
Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024
It has been a long time since I went anywhere like this, but your fabulous description took me back instantly :
Dogs under tables,
crumbs drizzling,
sought by tongues.
I hear the clatter of
crockery; voices...
Read full commentPosted in Rain at the Forest Cafe
Oh Luigi, I hope this doesn't
Posted on Thu, 18 Jul 2024
Oh Luigi, I hope this doesn't happen often! I cook for just me quite a bit as I am the only vegan in our house. If you have an onion, a carrot, tinned tomatoes and baked beans, you might rinse out the sugary sauce the beans come in, and cut up...
Read full commentPosted in Cooking for One
Hullo Paul :0)
Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024
Hullo Paul :0) Have huge worries too, not just about genuine green land being built on, but also that the necessary affordable homes are no more likely to be built now than before, because they do not provide the same level of profit?
Read full commentIt is...
Posted in "For, being green, there is great hope" (quote from Shakespeare's HENRY VI PART 2, ACT 3 SCENE 1)
Thankyou for sharing this
Posted on Wed, 10 Jul 2024
Thankyou for sharing this moment, Maxine :0) That was an interesting journey you had today, the stillness to appreciate beautiful designs of spider webs and the next, shock of one-wheeled motorbike racing off!!!
Read full commentPosted in The Creator.
Rhiannon, that sounds
Posted on Thu, 11 Jul 2024
Rhiannon, that sounds horrible! Remember you writing about tooth trouble in Covid, too. Though your poem is fun to read and makes light of what must have been a very grim experience, really glad you are pain free now!
Read full commentPosted in Extract!
I hope you had a lovely
Posted on Thu, 11 Jul 2024
I hope you had a lovely Birthday Jenny, and that this year for you is much, much, much better than last year! I loved the rich images and positivity in this poem, it is GREAT to read this new wonderful writing from you!
Read full commentPosted in Holding Onto My Desires And Dreams
Thankyou so much for your
Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024
Thankyou so much for your wonderful comment Paul, extremely well argued :0) Very sorry I did not realise you had made it, till this afternoon, and then when I did, internet stopped working again
Excellent point about Stone Henge being a...
Read full commentPosted in "For, being green, there is great hope" (quote from Shakespeare's HENRY VI PART 2, ACT 3 SCENE 1)
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