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You are quite right Tom, it's
Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017
You are quite right Tom, it's just a collection of nature scenes. It's just that I realised that someone from centuries ago could have seen them, too. And while I think of the wood as a beautiful place to go and see the sun and hear the birds....
Recently I have been shaking so much, and don't know, wonder if it is thinking of this. It is the trappedness that makes it seem worse, being held prisoner till agreeing to give up what's yours, being encouraged to this end by starvation, no...
I love that comment about service stations, you make them seem places for time travellers, too. Or, as in your story, modern in-between places, our stone circles/fairy rings.
Had not read your original version of this, but the one i have...
Don't know what to say. Thought I might quote some lines, then realised it is the whole of every part.
What is it doing to everyone? Those in there, suffering death, injury, loss because of the inaction of those outside; those outside...
Reading your story made me think of the quote : "For everything there is a season, and a time for every purpose under heaven" . In the first part, Cerian was not ready for the unknown, however wonderful it might be, and by the end, the reader...
How lovely to find a whole new band to explore! I am so glad you have something happy to light you through this time Jenny. I like the idea of music raining down very much, you soaking it up like a tree needing water
Wonderful rhyme and rhythm in your poem Rhiannon. Am wondering whether the News holds back saying there will be hosepipe bans for as long as they can, knowing the minute they say water levels are terribly low it will rain every day for weeks and...
Ah! So he IS made whole :0) Like the road not taken and the one you take, all lead to the same place? And Jack's character, how he developed, will seep into John, now. No regrets
You are quite right Tom, it's
Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017
You are quite right Tom, it's just a collection of nature scenes. It's just that I realised that someone from centuries ago could have seen them, too. And while I think of the wood as a beautiful place to go and see the sun and hear the birds....
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Recently I have been shaking
Posted on Wed, 02 Jul 2025
Recently I have been shaking so much, and don't know, wonder if it is thinking of this. It is the trappedness that makes it seem worse, being held prisoner till agreeing to give up what's yours, being encouraged to this end by starvation, no...
Read full commentPosted in Up to Their Ears in Tears
I love that comment about
Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025
I love that comment about service stations, you make them seem places for time travellers, too. Or, as in your story, modern in-between places, our stone circles/fairy rings.
Had not read your original version of this, but the one i have...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (2)
Don't know what to say.
Posted on Wed, 02 Jul 2025
Don't know what to say. Thought I might quote some lines, then realised it is the whole of every part.
Read full commentWhat is it doing to everyone? Those in there, suffering death, injury, loss because of the inaction of those outside; those outside...
Posted in Up to Their Ears in Tears
just an opinion
Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025
just an opinion
Yes, the first part works wonderfully as a stand alone.
The second and third parts seem to go on, to raise the question of choosing time and place and company?
In the past, if I understand correctly, choosing...
Read full commentPosted in A Pen y ffrwd Love Story Part Three
Reading your story made me
Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025
Reading your story made me think of the quote : "For everything there is a season, and a time for every purpose under heaven" . In the first part, Cerian was not ready for the unknown, however wonderful it might be, and by the end, the reader...
Read full commentPosted in A Pen y ffrwd Love Story Part Three
I hope your grief heals over
Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025
I hope your grief heals over so you are not aware of hurting all the time. This is fabulous but I am so sorry
Read full commentPosted in This Sad Blister
How lovely to find a whole
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025
How lovely to find a whole new band to explore! I am so glad you have something happy to light you through this time Jenny. I like the idea of music raining down very much, you soaking it up like a tree needing water
Read full commentPosted in Let Me Go Back
Wonderful rhyme and rhythm in
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025
Wonderful rhyme and rhythm in your poem Rhiannon. Am wondering whether the News holds back saying there will be hosepipe bans for as long as they can, knowing the minute they say water levels are terribly low it will rain every day for weeks and...
Read full commentPosted in Whatever the weather …
Ah! So he IS made whole :0)
Posted on Mon, 23 Jun 2025
Ah! So he IS made whole :0) Like the road not taken and the one you take, all lead to the same place? And Jack's character, how he developed, will seep into John, now. No regrets
Read full commentPosted in Dead Man: 6 (ii)
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