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and 26 of my stories have been cherry picked. 83 of my 430 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 83 votes
***** “So the post office closed the day after you got fired?” “Yeah,” said Mark. “So, maybe you won’t get in any trouble?” “Afraid that’s not going...
He turned back to the older woman. “Mrs. Higgins. She is a postmaster, and you should talk to her about your ideas for changing the post office. She...
***** She was driving on the freeway from UCLA to Castaic. It was slow-going through the San Fernando Valley, but when she hit Santa Clarita, traffic...
***** “You’re not going to worry about any of your missing persons’ cases anymore for the foreseeable future. If you were at roll call yesterday, or...
Wow, another great one. I'm going back through lots of poems of yours, as it seems that is what you have mostly been doing lately. Some more really good writing here. Congratulations on the cherries.
I should say another, another great one, better than good. I really enjoy reading your stuff, Jenny. My apologies that I usually only get to one of them every time I get on the site. Congratulations on the cherries.
That was done really well, quite moving. You definitely have a way with words. I am going back and reading some of your older stuff. I haven't seen much new stuff from you recently. This is really good, Paul.
Yeah, Bladerunner is also one of my favorite films. And the Roy character is just so well-written and acted. I prefer the movie to Dick's book, actually. I love that last dialogue between Roy and Decker at the end, so powerful and poetic...
Wow, what an experience. I'm a bit traveled myself, but haven't made it to a volcano yet. Cool that you were able to see that. As far as the writing goes, outstanding. My favorite line: "Beneath land lurks and underworld," but you probably could...
Yeah, great character actor, Ned Beatty. He was in a bunch of older stuff. I hadn't seen him around in quite a bit. Cool tribute. It was probably rough, as he wasn't even considered a dramatic character actor, a minor comedic character actor. Yet...
Another great one Jenny. I
Posted on Thu, 13 May 2021
Another great one Jenny. I have to keep going back through your slightly older poems to comment on your writing these days. Congrats on the cherries.
Read full commentPosted in Capturing Garden Memories
Some good writing, as usual.
Posted on Tue, 06 Jul 2021
Some good writing, as usual. I really liked the feel of this one, could almost picture it all quite vividly. Congratulations on the cherries.
Read full commentPosted in Where The Streets Have No Blame
Another good one
Posted on Wed, 07 Jul 2021
Hey Jenny, congrats on the golden cherries. Another good one. Well deserved.
Read full commentPosted in Daydreamer
Good writing
Posted on Mon, 24 May 2021
Good writing, Jenny. Any good writing about childhood, reminds me of my own, even though it was a different time and place. Congrats on the cherries.
Read full commentPosted in When We Were Young
Wow
Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021
Wow, another great one. I'm going back through lots of poems of yours, as it seems that is what you have mostly been doing lately. Some more really good writing here. Congratulations on the cherries.
Read full commentPosted in Footsteps on Mars
Another good one
Posted on Thu, 01 Jul 2021
I should say another, another great one, better than good. I really enjoy reading your stuff, Jenny. My apologies that I usually only get to one of them every time I get on the site. Congratulations on the cherries.
Read full commentPosted in Timeless Wonder
Really well done.
Posted on Wed, 12 May 2021
That was done really well, quite moving. You definitely have a way with words. I am going back and reading some of your older stuff. I haven't seen much new stuff from you recently. This is really good, Paul.
Read full commentPosted in The Last Elephant
Nice poem
Posted on Tue, 01 Jun 2021
Yeah, Bladerunner is also one of my favorite films. And the Roy character is just so well-written and acted. I prefer the movie to Dick's book, actually. I love that last dialogue between Roy and Decker at the end, so powerful and poetic...
Read full commentPosted in Roy Batty (Tears in Rain)
Cool
Posted on Sat, 26 Jun 2021
Wow, what an experience. I'm a bit traveled myself, but haven't made it to a volcano yet. Cool that you were able to see that. As far as the writing goes, outstanding. My favorite line: "Beneath land lurks and underworld," but you probably could...
Read full commentPosted in Timanfaya Volcanic National Park
Yeah, great character actor,
Posted on Wed, 23 Jun 2021
Yeah, great character actor, Ned Beatty. He was in a bunch of older stuff. I hadn't seen him around in quite a bit. Cool tribute. It was probably rough, as he wasn't even considered a dramatic character actor, a minor comedic character actor. Yet...
Read full commentPosted in Ned Is Dead
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