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***** Perry had lived for weeks in the meadow before she had moved to the throne room, or she thought it was weeks. Time had a way of not making much...
“Do you know what they are doing? How they are looking into it?” asked Oren. “No, I’m a student. I’m only an undergraduate student.” Malbourne glared...
83 of my comments have received 83 Great Feedback votes
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Interesting
Posted on Fri, 05 Feb 2021
Interesting read, nice and reflective. In your intro you mentioned that you were worried about being insensitive. I think others, especially in this day and age get offended too easily. I would encourage you to write what you are going to write,...
Hey Jenny, I really liked the personification in this one. I sometimes try to do animals, but as of yet, never a plant. I thought it was very clever to imagine what it is like for the tree.
A surprise poem. I should read your descriptions more carefully.
Posted on Tue, 03 Jan 2006
"Real poetry doesn't rhyme," a girl once told me years ago, when I was in the Army. She then proceeded to tell me that Simon and Garfunkel's "I am a Rock," was the best poem ever written. I reminded her that parts of the song do rhyme, yes it is...
I really liked this one. I daresay my favorite of yours that I have read thus far. I guess this was a time ago, but surely you can redo this one for cherries, or you could if I were dishing them out. It's my kind of story.
This is a good read. Interesting use of a raven. I quite liked it. Yeah, I am going through a few people's stories on here, and thought I might as well start at the beginning. Good work.
Some nice word usage here. Beautiful imagery as well. Maybe you stated it was a poem, but when I opnened the story I was expecting some prose. Very good.
You are a hell of a writer, no question. Highly interesting to shove Epicuras into your story, mentioning, Jung, and Rowling, and others was interesting. I understand most of your references, but the monkey one, the infinite monkey theorem, uh......
Interesting
Posted on Fri, 05 Feb 2021
Interesting read, nice and reflective. In your intro you mentioned that you were worried about being insensitive. I think others, especially in this day and age get offended too easily. I would encourage you to write what you are going to write,...
Read full commentPosted in The Theory of Everything (take 2)
Good one
Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2021
Hey Jenny, I really liked the personification in this one. I sometimes try to do animals, but as of yet, never a plant. I thought it was very clever to imagine what it is like for the tree.
Read full commentPosted in Big Belly Oak
A surprise poem. I should read your descriptions more carefully.
Posted on Tue, 03 Jan 2006
"Real poetry doesn't rhyme," a girl once told me years ago, when I was in the Army. She then proceeded to tell me that Simon and Garfunkel's "I am a Rock," was the best poem ever written. I reminded her that parts of the song do rhyme, yes it is...
Read full commentPosted in Just Another War
Great
Posted on Mon, 02 Jan 2006
I really liked this one. I daresay my favorite of yours that I have read thus far. I guess this was a time ago, but surely you can redo this one for cherries, or you could if I were dishing them out. It's my kind of story.
Read full commentPosted in The World's End Motel
Another good one
Posted on Sat, 31 Dec 2005
I like your stories. They are often character driven, and I enjoy the insights that we get into them. This one is unique.
Read full commentPosted in Private Hell
Interesting
Posted on Mon, 13 Sep 2004
This is a good read. Interesting use of a raven. I quite liked it. Yeah, I am going through a few people's stories on here, and thought I might as well start at the beginning. Good work.
Read full commentPosted in A Requiem For One Man's Life
Beautiful and serene
Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021
Beautiful and serene, Jenny. Another good one. Perhaps you didn't intend serenity, but I usually get that from your nature descriptions.
Read full commentPosted in Drifting On The Muse
Nice word usage
Posted on Thu, 28 Jan 2021
Some nice word usage here. Beautiful imagery as well. Maybe you stated it was a poem, but when I opnened the story I was expecting some prose. Very good.
Read full commentPosted in A Secret Forest
More great writing.
Posted on Wed, 20 Jan 2021
You are a hell of a writer, no question. Highly interesting to shove Epicuras into your story, mentioning, Jung, and Rowling, and others was interesting. I understand most of your references, but the monkey one, the infinite monkey theorem, uh......
Read full commentPosted in The Existential Fate of Original Thought
You are a great writer. I
Posted on Fri, 08 Jan 2021
You are a great writer. I like how another commenter brought up Schrodinger's Cat. I hadn't thought of that, but it actually fits. Great work.
Read full commentPosted in The Dead Cat
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