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and 26 of my stories have been cherry picked. 83 of my 430 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 83 votes
***** As the sun was about to set on the horizon, Malbourne was still confused as to why there were so few people around. Everywhere else in the city...
83 of my comments have received 83 Great Feedback votes
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Good one
Posted on Sun, 29 Aug 2021
Hey Jenny, good one. I like the imagery in this one. I think like this a lot too. It's cool that you can look at some clouds and have all these thoughts about them. Great work.
Great one, Jenny. Another well-written piece of thought. I liked the familiarity part of it. Uh...how can I explain? It's not copying and pasting appropriately. "When romance has put its vibrant passion to bed..." part was great, like after the...
Wow, I read your other one first, as I'm skipping around in here. I believe that most of them do grow up and change. It sounds like you just met a bunch of rotten people. Also, those that feigned friendship are not really friends. I've had...
Good one
Posted on Sun, 29 Aug 2021
Hey Jenny, good one. I like the imagery in this one. I think like this a lot too. It's cool that you can look at some clouds and have all these thoughts about them. Great work.
Read full commentPosted in Going With The Flow
Hey Jenny
Posted on Thu, 02 Sep 2021
Another great nature one. Good work.
Read full commentPosted in Trees Called To Me
Good one
Posted on Sun, 25 Jul 2021
As I had to freshen up on moon cycles and stuff a few months ago, I am appreciating the creative way you presented this. Great work.
Read full commentPosted in Force Of Life
More good writing, Paul. Nice
Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021
More good writing, Paul. Nice imagery. Really cool stuff. Congrats on the golden cherries.
Read full commentPosted in Another Night On a Bare Mountain
Another good one
Posted on Tue, 13 Jul 2021
Nicely worded. Well written. Solid theme. Great one. Congrats on the cherries.
Read full commentPosted in Penalties
My apologies, as I had
Posted on Tue, 25 May 2021
My apologies, as I had intended to get to this the other say when reading the others, but was sidetracked. Funny stuff, man. Good writing.
Read full commentPosted in The Sure Yank Redemption
Another good one
Posted on Wed, 14 Jul 2021
Great one, Jenny. Another well-written piece of thought. I liked the familiarity part of it. Uh...how can I explain? It's not copying and pasting appropriately. "When romance has put its vibrant passion to bed..." part was great, like after the...
Read full commentPosted in Coming Home
Wow
Posted on Mon, 12 Jul 2021
Wow, I read your other one first, as I'm skipping around in here. I believe that most of them do grow up and change. It sounds like you just met a bunch of rotten people. Also, those that feigned friendship are not really friends. I've had...
Read full commentPosted in People Who Want The Bullies To Win.
This one got much weirder
Posted on Wed, 21 Apr 2021
This one got much weirder than the last one. Funny, and well-written, as usual.
Read full commentPosted in Most Vial
Interesting
Posted on Sun, 15 Nov 2020
Yeah, this was interesting, to say the least. I really liked the way you presented the virus here. Congrats on the cherries.
Read full commentPosted in Invisible
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