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Chapter 12 Family life When shall mortal man be crowned, Crowned with immortality? Shadows here our path surround; Nothing is reality. April 1, 1831...
I remember a ballet dancer turning in my childhood musical box and recently saw a film on TV where the removed dancer was part of the evidence of murder. Anyway, it was a fun poem to read and relate to.
Your colourful picture was a good illustration of your wonderful dream. I never thought about touch not being in dreams. I'll have to concentrate when I have my next one. Beautifully done.
Hi Jenny
Posted on Tue, 07 Sep 2021
Hi Jenny
You do such a good job of putting the smells and sounds of the land in as well as the visual. Very well done.
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HI Paul
Posted on Tue, 22 Dec 2020
HI Paul
I found this all velry interesting. You make a lot of little details which make the story even better.
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HI Paul
Posted on Sun, 29 Aug 2021
HI Paul
I remember a ballet dancer turning in my childhood musical box and recently saw a film on TV where the removed dancer was part of the evidence of murder. Anyway, it was a fun poem to read and relate to.
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Hi Jenny
Posted on Mon, 23 Aug 2021
Hi Jenny
It was interesting to read this form of poetry. As usual, you did a wonderful job of telling the story.
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Hi Paul
Posted on Tue, 24 Aug 2021
Hi Paul
Beautifully done and such a sad reflection on our world.
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HI rhiannon
Posted on Thu, 12 Aug 2021
HI rhiannon
This is very powerful and so unfortunately true. Well written.
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Hi Jenny
Posted on Sun, 08 Aug 2021
Hi Jenny
I liked the style you wrote this in, which I presume was how he wrote his poetry. Beautifully done.
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HI Paul
Posted on Sun, 15 Nov 2020
HI Paul
This was great fun to read - and intrestng how you made the virus so detailed.
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HI Jenny
Posted on Wed, 04 Aug 2021
HI Jenny
What a lovely way to benefit from not sleeping. How delightful to be able to watch the fox and her babies.
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HI Jenny
Posted on Sat, 31 Jul 2021
HI Jenny
Your colourful picture was a good illustration of your wonderful dream. I never thought about touch not being in dreams. I'll have to concentrate when I have my next one. Beautifully done.
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