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Chapter 29 When the sun of bliss is beaming Light and love upon my way From the cross the radiance streaming Adds most lustre to the day. July, 1859...
I enjoyed reading this story. Lots of orignal ideas in it - like Mrs. Claus being a widow and missing her family. You write well, and keep the interest going. Well done.
Beautiful dewcriptions of hte teres. When my son was in Calaifornia, he took some cuttings of very old pine trees, to bring back to England. The dog ate several of the tiny trees but there is still one of them surviving and...
I could feel your panic in your story, and it sounds very like one I might have written when I had a partner to worry me about not knowing where he was. Well written.
I missed this back when it was posted. It is such fun to read. You did have an interesting life, and no doubt still do. I too find that songs I hear take me back to something that happened in the past, usually with very...
HI Paul
Posted on Sun, 12 Dec 2021
HI Paul
Great story so far. I look forward to reading the next part. I like your use of Americanisms. They seem to me, an American, quite natural sounding.
Posted in Saints and Sinners - A Christmas Fable (Part One of Two)
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Posted on Thu, 09 Dec 2021
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I enjoyed reading this story. Lots of orignal ideas in it - like Mrs. Claus being a widow and missing her family. You write well, and keep the interest going. Well done.
Read full commentPosted in Santa in Therapy
Lovely poem Rhiannon.I liked
Posted on Tue, 07 Dec 2021
Lovely poem Rhiannon.I liked your ending too.
Read full commentPosted in Trees
HI Jenny
Posted on Sat, 04 Dec 2021
HI Jenny
What a lovely poem about your garden, and a nice photo too. Well done.
Read full commentPosted in Nature's Hideaway
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Posted on Wed, 01 Dec 2021
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Beautiful dewcriptions of hte teres. When my son was in Calaifornia, he took some cuttings of very old pine trees, to bring back to England. The dog ate several of the tiny trees but there is still one of them surviving and...
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Hi Jenny
Posted on Sun, 28 Nov 2021
Hi Jenny
I could feel your panic in your story, and it sounds very like one I might have written when I had a partner to worry me about not knowing where he was. Well written.
Read full commentPosted in Trail Of Misunderstanding
Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Tue, 30 Nov 2021
Hi Rhiannon
A very clever poem, with your rhyme scheme working so well. And of course, a very iimportant message.
Read full commentPosted in Preparation Time
Hi Paul
Posted on Wed, 24 Nov 2021
Hi Paul
Beautifully written, with such a lot of detial.
Read full commentPosted in A Secret Garden
Hi Jenny
Posted on Sat, 23 Oct 2021
Hi Jenny
I missed this back when it was posted. It is such fun to read. You did have an interesting life, and no doubt still do. I too find that songs I hear take me back to something that happened in the past, usually with very...
Read full commentPosted in That Was Genesis
HI Paul
Posted on Tue, 16 Nov 2021
HI Paul
You use such lovely original words to paint your wonderful picture.
Read full commentPosted in When November Comes (with audio)
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