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I have 228 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 459541 times and 167 of my stories have been cherry picked.
171 of my 1,540 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 183 votes

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Maddalena

Doodles, scribbles and poesy.

Has the tact of a tin of mushy peas lobbed through a plate glass window.

Why? We're all folk, that's why.

Thank you for reading.

 

My stories

Cherry

Four week month

" "It's A Man's Man's Man's World"
Cherry

Snoring in the Chamber

tired doodle https://www.abctales.com/genre/inspiration-point-work-responds-our-weekl...
Cherry

Window

IP "Gathering" Speed write
Cherry

Statesmanship

Who the heck knows DaftDoodle
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171 of my comments have received 183 Great Feedback votes

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This takes me back!

Posted on Sun, 30 Apr 2023

Walking home from primary school with my sisterfriend, peering through over grown privet hedges around St Gabriels abandoned chapel, looking for the tell tale tracery of white meandering lines on a leaf, which when split, would reveal wee maggoty...

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Posted in Hunting the Sphinx ligustri

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Sumptuous

Posted on Sat, 22 Apr 2023

and vivid. You could have rested on the thoughtful descriptions alone, but

"...but Beware another brightness -

Fire licking!"

plus discarded cans for the treasure seeker.

Perhaps a presage of another searingly hot...

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Posted in stravaganza

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No worries

Posted on Tue, 11 Apr 2023

It was a lovely photo of light playing on the bark.

thank you again

Lena xxx

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Posted in This Green Isle

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:)

Posted on Tue, 11 Apr 2023

Witty, pointed and delightful, looking forward to your next thrilling installment

best

Lena x

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Posted in Hidden in the Mayonnaise (Part 2)

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Caught up

Posted on Fri, 17 Mar 2023

and enjoyed.  

best to you

Lena x

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Posted in Red Bicycle 21-22

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Juxtaposition

Posted on Mon, 27 Feb 2023

of attachment and imbued meaning in cherished "stuff" and that of personal freedom in that which is free of ritual meaning nicely done.

"It was as if she had taken

its form, eager to remain

 

refusing to vacate, her...

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Posted in Triptych

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You play

Posted on Thu, 09 Feb 2023

with words to cushion their blow, our loved ones lives are carried and vivified by ours.

Lovely.

Best as always

Lena x

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Posted in For As Long As

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Pretty and immersive;

Posted on Tue, 17 Jan 2023

Liked the clever use of "mossy dew kissing uncloven feet." to remove hint of mythos, purely a shared joy of an observable and natural world :)

Best

Lena x

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Posted in The Great and Secret Show

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Good read

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

I like the way his thoughts meander, grief as the rain always there, even in his brightest memory. Well handled, no jump scare, just love.

best 

Lena x

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Posted in Why Does It Always Rain In Graveyards?

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Gentle and quiet reflection

Posted on Wed, 21 Dec 2022

Gentle and quiet reflection on the strength of their love. Saddened and sorry for your loss Ewan.

Best to you and your family

Lena x

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Posted in Hereafter

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