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I have 228 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 419855 times and 167 of my stories have been cherry picked.
169 of my 1,535 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 181 votes

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Maddalena

Doodles, scribbles and poesy.

Has the tact of a tin of mushy peas lobbed through a plate glass window.

Why? We're all folk, that's why.

Thank you for reading.

 

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169 of my comments have received 181 Great Feedback votes

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Caught up

Posted on Thu, 30 Jun 2022

...so I'll have to be patient, while you cast your eye over Moffat 3

Enjoyed reading the story so far.

Best

Lena x

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Posted in The Picture Ranch 60

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Body count

Posted on Wed, 10 Nov 2021

rising, tho' Eleanor seems to have the higher score so far, I haven't kept tally :) Fisher appears to be better known, and targeted than he'd like, makes me wonder why she chose to use his services in the first place, given her apparent...

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Posted in The Picture Ranch 55

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Grim

Posted on Mon, 05 Jun 2017

and well told. Not a huge fan of this genre usually, but I'm hooked :)

Best as ever

Lena

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Posted in The Picture Ranch 28

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Clever

Posted on Tue, 28 Jun 2022

"A wee boy, all bright eyes, stared out a window as we trudged past his house. An almost unconscious ritual hoping to see something better, something more than us grey ghosts, outside time, and we fell silent under his gaze."

A foil to the...

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 44

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See Di-Hards' comment above:

Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022

and yes > ‘Noo, yer talkin shite –yed never get doubletime.’

Dark humour well handled.

More (greedy)

Lena x

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 42

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:)

Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022

Loved the little detail of the chicken attached to the musketeers bandolier, swinging there among the apostles :)

This is building very nicely, threads teased out ready to be woven.

Best

Lena x

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Posted in The Castle (16)

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Lovely

Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022

A real sense of place.

Best

Lena x

 

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Posted in Evening peace

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A quiet revelation

Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022

of promise in small things. Delightful and enjoyed.

best

Lena xx

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Posted in Meadowsweet

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"Time, you trickster"

Posted on Fri, 06 May 2022

yes, o yes

 

"Time you trickster,

 

with your end-of-pier magic

your patter and illusions

your shadowy assistant

 

clad in black."

 

Your kenning raises a wry smile, spot on!...

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Posted in Time and its Jovial Deceptions

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Very good

Posted on Thu, 05 May 2022

enjoyed x

best

Lena

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Posted in Hræfn

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