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I have 228 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 419823 times and 167 of my stories have been cherry picked.
169 of my 1,535 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 181 votes

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Maddalena

Doodles, scribbles and poesy.

Has the tact of a tin of mushy peas lobbed through a plate glass window.

Why? We're all folk, that's why.

Thank you for reading.

 

My stories

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Hoist Your Colours

Repost. Removed because I reflected that it may be too simple, angry and direct. It is, what it is.
Gold cherry

Table

Love doodle
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Cherry

Not Digitally Enhanced

Absentminded doodle
Cherry

Marshmallows

Thanks
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No matter the grey

https://www.abctales.com/inspiration-point-ip
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169 of my comments have received 181 Great Feedback votes

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Compassion and Empathy

Posted on Sun, 11 Jun 2023

... are gifts we have as humans, but use too infrequently.

best to you, thought provoking (as it should be) Poem ...

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Posted in 'With what judgment you judge, you will be judged'

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Yes.

Posted on Sun, 11 Jun 2023

...but man, is by scripture, flawed, therefore all human judgement is flawed; by your argument, to see ourselves through anothers eyes is to perceive the world  through another equally broken lens.

 Tricky eh?

love and strength...

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Posted in 'With what judgment you judge, you will be judged'

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Enjoyed reading

Posted on Mon, 12 Jun 2023

I always wonder at cryo-sleep themes in sci-fi, as is known, coming out of long term anathesia can produce altered states of mind which require careful management and oversight from a supervising med team, (AI as stand-in therapist onboard?)...

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Posted in Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Three of Three)

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Lovely

Posted on Fri, 09 Jun 2023

your phrase "Verge-froth" will stay with me, so apt :)

best to you

Lena x

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Posted in June Roadsides

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OY, MISSUS

Posted on Thu, 25 May 2023

...don't undersell yourself, s'good stuff heart

best as ever

Lena xx

 

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Posted in inklings

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Her understandable irritation

Posted on Fri, 12 May 2023

... didn't justify her spite.  Skillful management of detail and personalities. Pehaps his, a character who has made his choices at an age when he felt comfortable to make them, to change one thing now, is to change all: hers, a need to move on...

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Posted in The Oldest of the Type

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Ha!

Posted on Thu, 11 May 2023

Brought a smile on a soggy day, vivid and delightful.

My ma used to tell us that Thunder was the sound of Angels playing ten pin bowling :)

Best to you

Lena x

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Posted in Thinking Bad of Angels

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How many women

Posted on Wed, 10 May 2023

... are presented as painted automaton by folk who never write of their lived truth, only what men want to see?

"smile schooled in enigma"  

Key line, in a thoughtful piece; good stuff Paul

Best, Lena xx

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Posted in Geisha

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This takes me back!

Posted on Sun, 30 Apr 2023

Walking home from primary school with my sisterfriend, peering through over grown privet hedges around St Gabriels abandoned chapel, looking for the tell tale tracery of white meandering lines on a leaf, which when split, would reveal wee maggoty...

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Posted in Hunting the Sphinx ligustri

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Sumptuous

Posted on Sat, 22 Apr 2023

and vivid. You could have rested on the thoughtful descriptions alone, but

"...but Beware another brightness -

Fire licking!"

plus discarded cans for the treasure seeker.

Perhaps a presage of another searingly hot...

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Posted in stravaganza

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