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I have 228 stories published in
8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 459541 times
and 167 of my stories have been cherry picked.
171 of my 1,540 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 183 votes

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Posted on Fri, 05 Aug 2022
For months, there lay a pair of relatively new, white stilleto court shoes abandoned on the short leafy lane leading to our local amatuer football ground. I wondered at their story. Since the Lioness's victory, an added twist that it may have...
Read full commentPosted in The Forest of Discarded Raiment
Amongst the violence
Posted on Thu, 28 Jul 2022
broken bodies and bones, underworld, overworld of screen related monsters, this:
" There were two bulls and a detective smoking out front too.
One of the bulls, 300 pounds of fatty beef, shouted,"
Laughed out loud.
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Read full commentPosted in The Picture Ranch 66
So moving
Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2022
A good poem that keeps a firm rein on its sentiment, more emotive for that contol, read several times.
Best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Forget-Me-Not
Poignant
Posted on Tue, 26 Jul 2022
"He could be alive, and he will be, for as long as we don't find him.'"
Reminds me of an Ian McMillan poem from over a decade ago, which sadly I can't name, in which that switch of life to grief exists in the moment of knowing.
Your...
Read full commentPosted in The Picture Ranch 65
OO!
Posted on Mon, 25 Jul 2022
Wistful, perhaps melancholy in observation, your internal rhymes, and use of language are such a treat to read aloud. Super.
Best as always
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Ceiba (Silk-Cotton Tree)
Evocative
Posted on Fri, 22 Jul 2022
of time and place and calling song.
Ewan deserves a medal for inspiration, this is the second enjoyable "sound" poem read today :)
Best to you
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in Bed and Board by The Silk Road
Lovely
Posted on Fri, 22 Jul 2022
and pointed, a quiet roar to respect this place. Almost a librarians' firm, but gentle, shush among things yet to be learned and re-learned. Really enjoyed reading.
Best as always
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in sound escape
Ah!
Posted on Wed, 20 Jul 2022
oops, posted same comment twice!
Best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in The Click
Much said
Posted on Wed, 20 Jul 2022
...in few words.
Pre-set pieces, though ontologically and epistomologically determined beyond self, at least provide a certainty in the sound of making, the sound she hears :)
Impressed.
Best
Lena x
Read full commentPosted in The Click
Quiet, o so quiet
Posted on Tue, 19 Jul 2022
Interesting poem, these man made sounds we all live with adversley affect some with Aural hyperacuity, though lockdown was a pain, we relished the temporary silence of the local motorway, airspace and roads, heard All birdsong.
Though that...
Read full commentPosted in The Art of Noises : A Futurist's Manifesto
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