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I have 218 stories published in 27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 521775 times and 294 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1377 of my 4,427 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1390 votes

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I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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1377 of my comments have received 1390 Great Feedback votes

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Any poem with rain in it is

Posted on Thu, 28 Oct 2021

Any poem with rain in it is good by me. October does end damp, after all. A super poem, of course.

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Posted in Before Rhythm of Hours Change the Beat

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Hopefully things will get

Posted on Thu, 28 Oct 2021

Hopefully things will get sorted. Boris is working on it as we speak *cough*

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Posted in Wonky Planet (A Punky Tale Of The Future) by Alfred Muggins

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A pretty bleak summation in a

Posted on Fri, 15 Oct 2021

A pretty bleak summation in a cleverly put together poem. I like this format.

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Posted in point of no return

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A touching tribute, Jenny. I

Posted on Wed, 27 Oct 2021

A touching tribute, Jenny. I don't think it gets any tougher than losing a parent(s). I love that last paragraph/stanza, in particular. Paul x

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Posted in Blessings Dear Late Mum And Dad

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Another sweeping episode and

Posted on Wed, 27 Oct 2021

Another sweeping episode and wasn't aware of "Hatchards" [See 3rd para re typos "Elliott and" Lewis"]. Some famous names in there again. Keep 'em coming, Jean. Paul

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Posted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 10

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Love some of the words used -

Posted on Wed, 27 Oct 2021

Love some of the words used - "gast" and "flod" A super poem, of course

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Posted in Wintered Thin

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Holy moley - what a quest to

Posted on Tue, 26 Oct 2021

Holy moley - what a quest to find access to the loos. Yes, it was a bit barking closing all the public toilets during lockdown. Here's to more normal times.

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Posted in Muggins and His Wife Mrs Muggins Venture into Town During the Third Pandemic Lockdown of January 2021 (to drop her son off at the Blood Donation centre (and walk the dog!) : Part 3 : The Venture Is Spoiled By An Unforeseen Emergency

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Some great musos mentioned in

Posted on Tue, 26 Oct 2021

Some great musos mentioned in this. The Clash did a cover of "Stagger Lee" on London Calling. [Should that be "...he waits for Tom to finish"]

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Posted in W-E-R-E

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A very enjoyable diary entry.

Posted on Sat, 23 Oct 2021

A very enjoyable diary entry. Just before my time musically but loved the detail in this. Some big names in there. Never really got into Genesis and may have come to appreciate Wishbone Ash and Hawkwind if I had put my mind to it

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Posted in That Was Genesis

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"cold air's become a glitter

Posted on Wed, 06 Oct 2021

"cold air's become a glitter ball" There's that wonderful Di turn of phrase. A beautiful poem worthy of the accolades.

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Posted in October robin

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