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I have 218 stories published in
27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 521626 times
and 294 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1377 of my 4,427 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1390 votes
I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.
My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .
I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.
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Beautifully done, Luigi. Paul
Posted on Thu, 23 Sep 2021
Beautifully done, Luigi. Paul
Read full commentPosted in Autumn Leaves
Tension built nicely and
Posted on Thu, 23 Sep 2021
Tension built nicely and strong dialogue, of course. Cliffhanger finish!
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 40
I think every school had a
Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021
I think every school had a Jimmy Blue. My school had quite a few of them. Spookily, I wanted to be a journo when I was at school. I failed miserably to get anywhere near the straight As needed to get onto a relevant degree course. Oh well...as I...
Read full commentPosted in Move Away, Jimmy Blue
Carefully crafted and a
Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021
Carefully crafted and a lovely rhythm. Nicely done, Rhiannon. Paul :)
Read full commentPosted in The Wind in the Willows
A fascinating family history.
Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021
A fascinating family history. [Few typos: "...example of anti-Catholism.." "... his wife was brought.." "he was one of the best men..."]
Read full commentPosted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 5
There's definitely a fairy
Posted on Wed, 22 Sep 2021
There's definitely a fairy tale feel to this with a clear, underlying environmental warning. Nicely done. Paul :)
Read full commentPosted in Out in the Fields
Some beautiful imagery in
Posted on Tue, 21 Sep 2021
Some beautiful imagery in here and a haunting story. As always, some wonderful lines. This also made a great short story in prose form. So many aspects and a touching, intriguing series of events. You could actually add to the story, quite easily...
Read full commentPosted in Beneath An Autumn Moon The Poem
What a wonderful story.
Posted on Tue, 21 Sep 2021
What a wonderful story. Really enjoyed this. I read the poem first and wished I had done it the other way round!Paul
Read full commentPosted in Beneath An Autumn Moon - The Story
Ooh what a finale! Well
Posted on Sun, 19 Sep 2021
Ooh what a finale! Well played, Luigi.
Read full commentPosted in Travels with my Aunt
Passionate stuff from Alfred
Posted on Fri, 17 Sep 2021
Passionate stuff from Alfred Muggins. I am not sure that a replacement "policeman" can be found now. It's debatable whether one was ever needed but that's a whole, separate debate. In the meantime, we have the sanctity of biscuits.
Read full commentPosted in There's A New Biscuit In Town! (Called The Taliban Biscuit!) by Alfred N.Muggins
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