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I have 220 stories published in 27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 546020 times and 296 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1394 of my 4,468 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1407 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The Dead Cat

Steve “Stevo” Mason never did like school. At 14 years of age, the rest of his life looked a very long way away. Particularly bright at junior level...

Eleanor Cross

Eleanor, highborn of Castile, favoured daughter of Ferdinand, beloved, revered Queen to Albion’s powerhouse: The Longshanks. Noble monarch, woman of...
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Memento

I should delete these texts A permanence of darkness, where light no longer creeps, where memories fade, of bygone times. I can hardly see them now,...
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Happy New Year

It’s 23:17 at least that’s what my phone says. People don’t wear watches these days, do they? It’s pretty busy in here tonight but what do you expect...
Cherry

Empire State (Part 7 of 7): Escape

I broke from the reverie, heart beating faster, pulse raising. Sam was in danger. I could try and rush the bodyguards left to keep me here but there...
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1394 of my comments have received 1407 Great Feedback votes

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"...as I gaze upon

Posted on Sun, 08 Oct 2023

"...as I gaze upon

upper levels of sky

where clouds

have freedom to fly."

 

A beautiful finale to a beautiful poem. I could see those maple-leaf trees, Richard.

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Posted in A Taste of Autumn

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"...Wolf knows secrets...sees

Posted on Mon, 09 Oct 2023

"...Wolf knows secrets...sees ancient

tree spirits communication with

rivulets..."
Evocative and atmospheric. A dramatic poem, for sure. Enjoyed. Paul :)

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Posted in Through Wolf Eyes

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"...we fall from dreamy

Posted on Tue, 10 Oct 2023

"...we fall from dreamy

waterfall into flowing

inspirational rivers of

thought.."

A lovely anaology and a lingering optimism amongst your words. Nicely done, of course. Paul

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Posted in Curious Magic

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Not sure the Tchaikovsky

Posted on Wed, 04 Oct 2023

Not sure the Tchaikovsky Group has the same menace about it but I know what you mean. Hopefully Alfred will get his trip to Timbuctou soon. It's a long way, you know.. 

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Posted in Holidays in Timbuctou, by Alfred N.Muggins (rogue reporter!)

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"... and was chopped down

Posted on Tue, 03 Oct 2023

"... and was chopped down

but grew and thrived again.."

I hope that's an allegory for the Sycamore Gap tree that was felled. 

 

A lovely poem, so well done, Rhiannon. Paul 

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Posted in We have three little trees …

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It's interesting to read how

Posted on Mon, 02 Oct 2023

It's interesting to read how Alfred tries to make things easier through his power of hindsight. Your knowledge of this period of history is impressive. It makes it an ongoing, enjoyable read. 

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Posted in The Courtier From The 21st Century Who Would Be King : The King Behind The Throne : King Henry VIII (Alfred the Great II) : Ch.5 by Alfred Muggins (himself) Part 2 : Wives

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"... before fall of Autumn's

Posted on Mon, 02 Oct 2023

"... before fall of Autumn's swell.."

A sweep through the seasons done so adroitly. Beautiful imagery and sentiments. Nicely done, Jenny. Paul :) 

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Posted in Beneath My Favourite Tree

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"A rainbow paints its mystic

Posted on Wed, 27 Sep 2023

"A rainbow paints its mystic tones

On jagged teeth of ancient stone.."

A sweeping journey back to roots brought to life with great evocation. I could feel the lore running through the words. Glenlough sounds stunning.

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Posted in Beneath Cnoc Daod

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"...but now the treat is to

Posted on Thu, 28 Sep 2023

"...but now the treat is to look down
on seal cubs asleep on pebbly coves..."

Wonderful images and lovely photos. As you know, I was in Pembrokeshire myself only recently. Your poem does the location justice, Rhiannon. Paul

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Posted in Pembrokeshire — two seasons

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The lead singer of The Cure

Posted on Tue, 26 Sep 2023

The lead singer of The Cure has a lot to answer for. Evocative images conjured from your past, Jenny. We all do stuff we wish we hadn't...it's what makes us human :)

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Posted in Misguided In The Early 90s

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