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I have 260 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1228616 times and 351 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1636 of my 5,099 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1673 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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The Sure Yank Redemption

This is a sequel to: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/most-vial The jet plane roared as it penetrated trans-Atlantic airspace. The ocean rose...
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The Last Elephant

Forged in bucolic harmonies, an interdependence born of millennia, a symbiosis of flora and fauna, when humanity lived as one, in a world of...
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Footsteps on Mars

In the dead of an iridescent moonlit night, in an amphitheatre of curious crickets, chirping in the rattling reed bush, I am camped under a haven of...
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Most Vial

This is a sequel to “Invisible” at https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/invisible The walls looked as dull today as they had yesterday. Paint...
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Poem of the week

Setting Sons

I have seen the spectral darkness, quiescent corridors where emotions quietly dissipate. I have been in the unlit, silent void, a vale of tears where...

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1636 of my comments have received 1673 Great Feedback votes

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"there's tiny

Posted on Mon, 24 Jun 2024

"there's tiny

secret footprints across leafy

glade of my world, setting

visions of wonder."

Imagination is a wonderful thing. I enjoyed that flight of fantasy with you, Jenny.

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Posted in His Flight

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"The people of both sides

Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024

"The people of both sides will be shown justice and respect for once."

That's a decent dream of Alfred's. Hoping it comes true one day.

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Posted in Alfred Muggins’ Easter Dream

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"So, what do I do 

Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024

"So, what do I do 

of these penny pastiches 

that flutter and stutter awry"

 

That's a wonderful poem.

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Posted in Dirge for another year gone by

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Ah thanks Jenny. Hoping you

Posted on Mon, 17 Jun 2024

Ah thanks Jenny. Hoping you are on the mend now.

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Posted in West of Ireland

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It is odd that "democracy"

Posted on Thu, 20 Jun 2024

It is odd that "democracy" stands and falls on a choice of just two. To be fair, ideologically, the parties in the US are diametrically at opposite ends of the political spectrum so there is choice. At least an illusion of choice. It seems rough...

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Posted in The Year of the Elections by Alfred N.Muggins

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"Everybody knows that, since

Posted on Wed, 19 Jun 2024

"Everybody knows that, since I auditioned for Britain's Got Talent. Some bastard put me on YouTube!'"

Sparkling dialogue in this part. Dai's misplaced paranoia made me smile. [Is all paranoia misplaced?]

Coming along very nicely!

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Posted in 17 What Would Interest Big Brother in Merthyr Tydfil?

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"Embattled Satan’s hold was

Posted on Wed, 19 Jun 2024

"Embattled Satan’s hold was trounced
when gospel life and power announced.."

The energy and rhythm of the poem captures the evangelical aspect at its heart. I looked up John Pugh to cross reference with your piece. As ever, very...

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Posted in Light for heaviness

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Hi Jenny. Just popping to

Posted on Wed, 22 May 2024

Hi Jenny. Just popping to wish you well and hope you are on the mend. Take care of yourself. Paul x

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Posted in State Of Bliss

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"..because his endless cups

Posted on Fri, 07 Jun 2024

"..because his endless cups of tea and propensity towards taking care of her was causing a regular release of oxytocin."

Well....yes! Made me laugh. Quintessential, of course.

This is getting to be novella length. You could...

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Posted in Parcel for you....Part 27

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Soul templates? It's like a

Posted on Tue, 11 Jun 2024

Soul templates? It's like a Hellish version of Timpsons.

A tale of redemption told in a post-Dante fashion. Your creative mind remains as fertile as ever, Jane. Really enjoyed this.

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Posted in Peter's Soul

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