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I have 266 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1269076 times and 358 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1671 of my 5,196 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1708 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Penalties

On 11 th July 2021 the England Football team lost on penalties to Italy after a 1-1 draw having played extra time in the Final of the Euro2020...
Cherry

Steve Mason and the Music Nazi

This is the third entry in the Steve Mason’s School Days at https://www.abctales.com/collection/steve-masons-school-days Steve “Stevo” Mason just...
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Cherry

Where The Streets Have No Blame

I pass you on the desolate streets, huddled under weather-worn blankets, in dimly lit, dank shop doorways, the smell of wandering urine is acidic,...
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Estival Solstice

21 st June 2021 is the day of the Summer Solstice As dawn’s first light skims skies, revealing an incandescent ball of fire, rising beyond a Heel...
Cherry

Cherry Tree

Dedicated to the cherry tree in my front garden. It brings me much joy. Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/cherry-tree-mp3 In the...

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1671 of my comments have received 1708 Great Feedback votes

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"‘I like Stuart’s bandana,’

Posted on Thu, 25 Jul 2024

"‘I like Stuart’s bandana,’ Vanessa shouted over to Pat. This wasn’t a truthful statement, the bandana looked absurd and she quickly took a swig of warm beer to obscure her lying face..."

Straight in with humour :O)

Lots of very...

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 31

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"Will you miss the nights in

Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2024

"Will you miss the nights in the pub with the gang?

Will you send me a postcard from Ujung Pandang?"

There's a wistful feel to this, Turlough.

It's like a stream of conscious style that's also reflective looking back on times...

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Posted in Candi Staton, the Sea and Me

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Great story.

Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2024

Great story.

I love the train of thought that underpins the narration. And the small detail, as always. Yes, that's an alluring twist to end with!

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Posted in Lie, lie against the dying of the light

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"Floating ballroom dresses.."

Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2024

"Floating ballroom dresses.."

A gorgeous vignette and lovely photo, Rhiannon.

Beauty captured so eloquently in so few words.

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Posted in Begonia …

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"This temporary existence not

Posted on Wed, 24 Jul 2024

"This temporary existence not to every

ones taste, yet for me at this time of

crippling pain, has created respite from

life's expectations.

 

I'm suspended between two worlds;"

 

You have captured...

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Posted in Suspended Between Two Worlds

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This wonderful evocation of

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

This wonderful evocation of another time and place is today's Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

Congratulations, Turlough.

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Posted in Tang Hall Beck

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This appears to be going well

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

This appears to be going well. Lots of magic interwoven into a quest. Looking good. Will read some more :)

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Posted in 'Unwanted Magic" 7

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"He stood out because they

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

"He stood out because they all had beers in their hands but he was standing perfectly still, with his arms crossed and a felted wool toadstool on his head."

Spencer looks and sounds like a fish out of water more than ever in this episode...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 30

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Well it's nice to hear that

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

Well it's nice to hear that Alfred had a break even if it seems to have arisen out of confusion. The company's loss and our gain at reading more of his work.I wonder if he will ever get back to his 'Henry VIII timeswap with Alfred' stories. Maybe...

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Posted in ‘D Day’ : Leap Into The Unknown! (Community Care!? Actually) by Alfred N. Muggins (current affairs observer, and undercover reporter!)

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Nicely done and you should

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

Nicely done and you should definitely carry on with this. It reads like ideal fiction for children/young adults with its lilting narrative. Looking forward to the next part

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Posted in Tom's Secret

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