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I have 276 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1376650 times and 373 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1737 of my 5,373 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1788 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

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Autumn

Autumn The Harvest Moon will reach peak illumination on Monday, September 20 The Autumn Equinox is on Wednesday 22 nd September 2021 Moonlight lunar...
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With or Without You

We promise ourselves to remember…always. Sometimes memories can eventually be washed away like sandcastles on a beach… Dan Foley had waited for this...
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Cherry

Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)

This is the story I read live at the ABC Reading on 26 th August 2021. I understand not everyone could hear it due to technical issues so here is an...
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Cherry

Ballerina Toy Box

The boundary between the real and imagined world can be a thin veil Daylight fades, an ethereal twilight descends, I turn the key, music tinkles like...
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Kabul Airport

https://www.independent.co.uk/asia/south-asia/afghanistan-latest-kabul-a... https://www.fr24news.com/a/2021/08/children-orphaned-as-their-parents-cr...
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1737 of my comments have received 1788 Great Feedback votes

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Posted on Sat, 26 Oct 2024

That's a powerful last line. Foreboding. Let's hope sanity prevails. Eventually.

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Posted in If Netanyahu and the Israelis should invade Britain? (Don’t panic! It’s only History repeating itself!) by Alfred N.Muggins

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That's writing discipline

Posted on Fri, 04 Oct 2024

That's writing discipline right there...12 months and 36,600 words later. Congratulations on a genuine achievement (I'm not sure what a non-genuine achievement is but it seemed to scan).

You have a definite talent for writing travelogue....

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Posted in Ex Crete

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All caught up again.

Posted on Tue, 08 Oct 2024

All caught up again.

Yes, the "experiencing high volumes...we value your call.." is spot on! I've had that a few times just recently.

That's a comic dilemma neatly chiselled. I sense a debate around an invalid claim coming from the...

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Posted in Parcel for You...Part 37

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"..then followed

Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2024

"..then followed

by a Peter Pan moment swooping

down with his shadow."

That's a powerful image, that child-like connection linking younger days to older. Time goes so quickly but poetry can be timeless. Great stuff, Jenny.

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Posted in Magic Of Youth

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Still such a difficult and

Posted on Mon, 14 Oct 2024

Still such a difficult and complex situation in the Middle East. Alfred's angst will be shared by so many.

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Posted in Death Trap by Alfred N.Muggins (rogue armchair historian and reporter!)

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This latest diary entry is

Posted on Thu, 03 Oct 2024

This latest diary entry is wonderfully entertaining, educational and humorous.

It's today's Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

Congratulations.

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Posted in The Old Man and the Libyan Sea

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Does it rain more in Ireland?

Posted on Mon, 30 Sep 2024

Does it rain more in Ireland?

We've all chased rainbows at some point. I'm sure Alfred will find his pot of gold one day. We want to read his novels.

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Posted in Chasing Rainbows by Alfred N.Muggins

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Gorgeous pics.

Posted on Tue, 01 Oct 2024

Gorgeous pics.

A sweeping vignette that shows again how connected you are to nature and the seasons, Rhiannon.

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Posted in Seasons’ Round

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"...and on the top of the

Posted on Wed, 02 Oct 2024

"...and on the top of the little ridge
view eastward to Clee Hill
and south to the Malverns."

Another wonderfully visual ramble with you, Rhiannon. I was right there with you. Lovely pics, as usual :)

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Posted in Above CravenArms 29/9/24

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That's a wonderful poem as

Posted on Thu, 03 Oct 2024

That's a wonderful poem as the introduction.

As always, a beautifully crafted travelogue laced with humour. You bring the sites, sights and sounds to life so evocatively.

I stayed at Hersonissus years ago and loved Crete. It's a...

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Posted in The Old Man and the Libyan Sea

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