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I have 278 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1493443 times and 377 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1760 of my 5,429 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1815 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Strangers on a Street

A fleeting acquaintance can be memorable but will it be remembered? Strangers on a Street Rain cascades in near horizontal sheets, neon light dances...
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Giant Redwoods

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/giant-redwoods-mp3 Shafts of silver light cascade at twilight, a canopy bordering an evening...
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Autumn

Autumn The Harvest Moon will reach peak illumination on Monday, September 20 The Autumn Equinox is on Wednesday 22 nd September 2021 Moonlight lunar...
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With or Without You

We promise ourselves to remember…always. Sometimes memories can eventually be washed away like sandcastles on a beach… Dan Foley had waited for this...
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Cherry

Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)

This is the story I read live at the ABC Reading on 26 th August 2021. I understand not everyone could hear it due to technical issues so here is an...
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1760 of my comments have received 1815 Great Feedback votes

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It's a curious one isn't it?

Posted on Mon, 25 Nov 2024

It's a curious one isn't it? Back to the old rhetoric of trade tariffs and deporting migrants. The world gets ever stranger.

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Posted in Liberal Disaster! by Alfred N.Muggins

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"...robin flaunts red breast

Posted on Sat, 23 Nov 2024

"...robin flaunts red breast in

display, showing authority

this chilly day...."

 

That's a beautiful seasonal poem full of vivid imagery.

Love the pen picture of possibly my favourite bird of all. I adore robins...

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Posted in Winter Dreams

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"..That’s a Charlie Manson

Posted on Fri, 15 Nov 2024

"..That’s a Charlie Manson quote,’ said Spencer.

‘Oh wow!’ Carol said, her voice loud and grating..."

Strong character building makes for an absorbing read.

The family interactions are so well done.

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Posted in Parcel for You..Part 41

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Extended metaphor to

Posted on Mon, 18 Nov 2024

Extended metaphor to complement a real life conflict in the protagonist's story. That's advanced stuff. I particularly like the supernatural aspect - right down my street. High quality, Jane. Really well done.

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Posted in Cricks Crocodile

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Something I have come to

Posted on Tue, 19 Nov 2024

Something I have come to realise as I get older is that all that's left in the end are memories. As long as we remember someone they live on.

Trying to make sense of it all probably does boil down to trying to enjoy every moment. Easier...

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Posted in Endings

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Oh completely wonderful. I'm

Posted on Tue, 19 Nov 2024

Oh completely wonderful. I'm a fan of Winnie the Pooh and absolutely loved reading that. This poem could appear in a collection for children. One of your best, Rhiannon!

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Posted in The Bears Discuss

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Reads like a folk tale and

Posted on Wed, 13 Nov 2024

Reads like a folk tale and skilfully done, for sure. Much enjoyed.

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Posted in The Cinnabar Moth

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[CM has servants? Who knew]

Posted on Tue, 12 Nov 2024

[CM has servants? Who knew]

It's reassuring to read about another election in Bulgaria. It didn't feature on the News at Ten here so I would have missed it completely if you hadn't mentioned it.

'Long days of tilling land'. It...

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Posted in The Tale of the Housemaid’s Knee

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'...and as last leaves are

Posted on Tue, 12 Nov 2024

'...and as last leaves are shed and blown
floating, drifting, fluttering down..'

Beautiful poem, beautiful pics.

Wonderful images and you have captured aspects of the season so well, of course.

Just lovely, Rhiannon.

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Posted in Bright end of autumn

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"..she called at the crack of

Posted on Thu, 07 Nov 2024

"..she called at the crack of dawn to unburden herself with the responsibility of acknowledging her daughter’s birthday.." There's that trademark humour even if it's couched in cynicism :)

The exchanges between Spencer and Vanessa remain...

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Posted in Parcel for You..Part 40

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