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I have 280 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1540789 times and 379 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1766 of my 5,455 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1822 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Dreams of Halloween

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/dreams-of-halloween-mp3 Dreams of Halloween In celluloid dreams I walk in graveyards of the...
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Samhain and Beyond

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/samhain-and-beyond-revised-mp3 Samhain and Beyond We stand in hallowed doorways, hand in hand,...
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Cherry

Strangers on a Street

A fleeting acquaintance can be memorable but will it be remembered? Strangers on a Street Rain cascades in near horizontal sheets, neon light dances...
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Cherry

Giant Redwoods

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/giant-redwoods-mp3 Shafts of silver light cascade at twilight, a canopy bordering an evening...
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Cherry

Autumn

Autumn The Harvest Moon will reach peak illumination on Monday, September 20 The Autumn Equinox is on Wednesday 22 nd September 2021 Moonlight lunar...
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1766 of my comments have received 1822 Great Feedback votes

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A belated happy birthday.

Posted on Tue, 10 Dec 2024

A belated happy birthday.

Yes, I enjoyed looking at those photos as I have on Instagram. You have a keen eye for an interesting shot.

Your love of Europe..and Bulgaria shines through (the rain).

Another insightful, accessible...

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Posted in A Tale of Two Balkan Cities

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Read both parts. Really

Posted on Tue, 03 Dec 2024

Read both parts. Really enjoyed. You have left it in a way that it could be added to.

Of course, an important underlying message about the environment but delivered in a way that avoids sledgehammer lack of subtlety. Let the reader absorb...

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Posted in The Road To Ponkerton Village - Part 2

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Gloriously surreal with an

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2024

Gloriously surreal with an important underlying message. You write in first person so well. A pleasure to read.

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Posted in The fickleness of new daylight

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A deftly crafted elegy of

Posted on Mon, 02 Dec 2024

A deftly crafted elegy of sorts. I imagine this was a real person?

There's a lot going on between these lines underpinned by your trademark humour. I could touch and feel the conflicting emotions largely driven by religious undertones....

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Posted in Kathleen’s Secret

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Loved the ending, Jenny.

Posted on Tue, 03 Dec 2024

Loved the ending, Jenny.

A message for our time. Environment over greed.

If everyone followed this mantra, the world would be a much better place!

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Posted in John's Conscience

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"What a gift to the country,

Posted on Tue, 26 Nov 2024

"What a gift to the country,
what a gift to our world
the little beetle’s waste management
cleaning up our environment!"

I enjoyed the pulsing rhythm and rhyme of this.

It really is an interesting story and very...

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Posted in Pasture-Cleaners

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It's a curious one isn't it?

Posted on Mon, 25 Nov 2024

It's a curious one isn't it? Back to the old rhetoric of trade tariffs and deporting migrants. The world gets ever stranger.

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Posted in Liberal Disaster! by Alfred N.Muggins

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"...robin flaunts red breast

Posted on Sat, 23 Nov 2024

"...robin flaunts red breast in

display, showing authority

this chilly day...."

 

That's a beautiful seasonal poem full of vivid imagery.

Love the pen picture of possibly my favourite bird of all. I adore robins...

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Posted in Winter Dreams

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"..That’s a Charlie Manson

Posted on Fri, 15 Nov 2024

"..That’s a Charlie Manson quote,’ said Spencer.

‘Oh wow!’ Carol said, her voice loud and grating..."

Strong character building makes for an absorbing read.

The family interactions are so well done.

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Posted in Parcel for You..Part 41

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Extended metaphor to

Posted on Mon, 18 Nov 2024

Extended metaphor to complement a real life conflict in the protagonist's story. That's advanced stuff. I particularly like the supernatural aspect - right down my street. High quality, Jane. Really well done.

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Posted in Cricks Crocodile

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