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I have 274 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1332756 times and 370 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1712 of my 5,311 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1756 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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My stories

Cherry

Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)

This is the story I read live at the ABC Reading on 26 th August 2021. I understand not everyone could hear it due to technical issues so here is an...
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Cherry

Ballerina Toy Box

The boundary between the real and imagined world can be a thin veil Daylight fades, an ethereal twilight descends, I turn the key, music tinkles like...
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Kabul Airport

https://www.independent.co.uk/asia/south-asia/afghanistan-latest-kabul-a... https://www.fr24news.com/a/2021/08/children-orphaned-as-their-parents-cr...
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Gold cherry

Leaving Home

Rain falls as drizzle – recalcitrant, obstinate, framing a doorway filled by fretful parents, staring into a no man’s land of sadness, one last,...
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Gold cherry
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Saccades of Sands

A clicking camera shutter, perpetual saccades, capturing fleeting moments that mark epochs, littered in sentiment and seminal occasions,...

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1712 of my comments have received 1756 Great Feedback votes

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"..bring peace in some

Posted on Thu, 12 Sep 2024

"..bring peace in some measure where there’s fighting now.." Wise words, Rhiannon. And more relevant than ever with the conflicts currently ongoing.

I so hope that "..love will flow earthwide.."

Beautifully expressed words.

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Posted in All related

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That's an evocative poem,

Posted on Thu, 12 Sep 2024

That's an evocative poem, Jenny. A pen-picture beautifully drawn as always. Just lovely.

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Posted in Escape To Ridgeway

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Another wonderfully unique

Posted on Sat, 07 Sep 2024

Another wonderfully unique tale.

That's why this is our Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

Congratulations, Itane.

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Posted in No escape from reality

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It looks odds on that CGT

Posted on Fri, 06 Sep 2024

It looks odds on that CGT will be aligned with personal rates of taxation at 20/40/45% at the next budget. Probably with immediate effect from 30th October. Landlords are already selling up in droves. Labour in Wales are levying 200% council tax...

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Posted in The Bleeding Of Britain and the People (from the Imaginations of Alfred N.Muggins)

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What a brilliantly original

Posted on Sat, 07 Sep 2024

What a brilliantly original notion - the anthropomorphism of the Devil. You do these philosophical musings so well. Life is rarely black and white and was it ever greyer than attributing human frailties to Satan? Loved this.

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Posted in No escape from reality

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Eesh..I've seen images of MRI

Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024

Eesh..I've seen images of MRI scans on the telly. Everyone seems intimidated by them and some folks can't make it all the way through the session. I can only imagine how scary the loud sounds must be. So glad your health issue has been narrowed...

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Posted in Can Life Get Better?

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"Do they engage in wistful

Posted on Thu, 05 Sep 2024

"Do they engage in wistful reverie as I do.."

You have captured quite a complicated avian picture there, Jenny. The hierarchy of birds. Word pictures skilfully assembled in your poem.

Personally, I rather like corvids. There's...

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Posted in Contemplating Crows

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"..and boilers get busy

Posted on Thu, 05 Sep 2024

"..and boilers get busy
to make our homes cosy."

You capture the mood of the changing season so reflectively, Rhiannon. Some lovely imagery in here.

Personally, I don't mind the end of summer at all. I adore autumn and winter...

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Posted in The earth moves on …

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Thanks for reading, Di. I

Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024

Thanks for reading, Di. I think a lot more needs to more researched on this particular innovation before anyone can pontificate. In the meantime ...we speculate instead :)

[Hope all is well in your beautiful part of the world]

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Posted in Ghostbot (Part One of Two)

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"The summer imperceptibly is

Posted on Mon, 02 Sep 2024

"The summer imperceptibly is ending,
our path towards an end is wending..."

That's a thoughtful sweep through the seasons, Rhiannon.

Let's hope the last stanza comes true.

Very nicely done, as always.

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Posted in The Seasonal Years …

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