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I have 265 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1261602 times and 357 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1665 of my 5,180 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1702 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Cherry

Steve Mason and the Music Nazi

This is the third entry in the Steve Mason’s School Days at https://www.abctales.com/collection/steve-masons-school-days Steve “Stevo” Mason just...
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Cherry

Where The Streets Have No Blame

I pass you on the desolate streets, huddled under weather-worn blankets, in dimly lit, dank shop doorways, the smell of wandering urine is acidic,...
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Estival Solstice

21 st June 2021 is the day of the Summer Solstice As dawn’s first light skims skies, revealing an incandescent ball of fire, rising beyond a Heel...
Cherry

Cherry Tree

Dedicated to the cherry tree in my front garden. It brings me much joy. Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/cherry-tree-mp3 In the...
Gold cherry

Roy Batty (Tears in Rain)

This is a tribute to Roy Batty played by the late Rutger Hauer from one of my favourite movies - Blade Runner (1982) https://bladerunner.fandom.com/...

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1665 of my comments have received 1702 Great Feedback votes

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This appears to be going well

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

This appears to be going well. Lots of magic interwoven into a quest. Looking good. Will read some more :)

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Posted in 'Unwanted Magic" 7

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"He stood out because they

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

"He stood out because they all had beers in their hands but he was standing perfectly still, with his arms crossed and a felted wool toadstool on his head."

Spencer looks and sounds like a fish out of water more than ever in this episode...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 30

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Well it's nice to hear that

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

Well it's nice to hear that Alfred had a break even if it seems to have arisen out of confusion. The company's loss and our gain at reading more of his work.I wonder if he will ever get back to his 'Henry VIII timeswap with Alfred' stories. Maybe...

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Posted in ‘D Day’ : Leap Into The Unknown! (Community Care!? Actually) by Alfred N. Muggins (current affairs observer, and undercover reporter!)

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Nicely done and you should

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

Nicely done and you should definitely carry on with this. It reads like ideal fiction for children/young adults with its lilting narrative. Looking forward to the next part

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Posted in Tom's Secret

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"A causeway of slimy stones

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

"A causeway of slimy stones

As green as beer bottles

Shattered and scattered.."
 

That an evocative poem with pen pictures drawn so distinctly.

Took me to another time and place.

Fine work indeed.

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Posted in Tang Hall Beck

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"A family of bears had a nice

Posted on Sat, 20 Jul 2024

"A family of bears had a nice little cottage,
Mother Bear made them their breakfast porridge.."

That's an inventive take on the classic story.

Very enjoyable, Rhiannon.

And a lovely picture :)

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Posted in They said, 'Trespassers will …

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I always though mum went to

Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024

I always thought mum went to Iceland. Hmmm....maybe that was an ad...

That's a very creative poem about Eric/Iceland. It's actually very clever the way you have interwoven the theme of country and store, blending humour with dry...

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Posted in Eric’s War

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Was talking about Putin only

Posted on Thu, 18 Jul 2024

Was talking about Putin only yesterday. History has a habit of repeating itself so I wondered whether he would be airbrushed from history in the same way Stalin was in Russia after his death. I'm sure they would make good soul brothers if they...

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Posted in Pearly Gates : A Tour of Russia’s Hell by Alfred N.Muggins Part 3

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"Vanessa suddenly remembered

Posted on Tue, 16 Jul 2024

"Vanessa suddenly remembered what Cher sounded like with autotune.." Made me laugh...I think I know the song you are referring to.

You have built up to this latest set-piece so well. I can only imagine how Spencer will get on at a festival...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 29

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Well at least Masoud

Posted on Tue, 16 Jul 2024

Well at least Masoud Pezeshkian won the run-off to become the President in Iran. A relative moderate, he now needs to dial down the influence of the Theocrats. Let's hope it leads to better relations with the West and other countries in that...

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Posted in An Easter Message Of Confusion from Alfred N.Muggins Part 3

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