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I have 240 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1037906 times and 323 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1560 of my 4,885 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1581 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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My stories

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The Dead Cat

Steve “Stevo” Mason never did like school. At 14 years of age, the rest of his life looked a very long way away. Particularly bright at junior level...

Eleanor Cross

Eleanor, highborn of Castile, favoured daughter of Ferdinand, beloved, revered Queen to Albion’s powerhouse: The Longshanks. Noble monarch, woman of...
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Memento

I should delete these texts A permanence of darkness, where light no longer creeps, where memories fade, of bygone times. I can hardly see them now,...
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Happy New Year

It’s 23:17 at least that’s what my phone says. People don’t wear watches these days, do they? It’s pretty busy in here tonight but what do you expect...
Cherry

Empire State (Part 7 of 7): Escape

I broke from the reverie, heart beating faster, pulse raising. Sam was in danger. I could try and rush the bodyguards left to keep me here but there...
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1560 of my comments have received 1581 Great Feedback votes

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Nicely done, Luigi. Gripping

Posted on Thu, 22 Feb 2024

Nicely done, Luigi. Gripping and compelling. Keep going!

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Posted in A Devil of a Man (7) - In Vino Veritas

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Such a sad story well told.

Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2024

Such a sad story well told.

[Small typo: Should be "raindrops"?]

 

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Posted in The moon is all bluish tonight

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It's ironic that Stalin was

Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2024

It's ironic that Stalin was airbrushed from Russian history and yet, as alluded to here, the ignomy of his deeds is being repeated. Perhaps in time and probably after his death, Plutin will suffer the same fate.

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Posted in Pearly Gates : A Tour of Russia’s Hell by Alfred N.Muggins Part 2

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Not sure I ever had to endure

Posted on Mon, 19 Feb 2024

Not sure I ever had to endure an appraisal by Zoom (thankfully). I imagine they are de rigeur these days. Made me shudder hearing/reading the corporate stuff, though. I imagine you are drawing from first hand experience to get it so accurate/...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 19

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Plutin, Putinpot and Putin -

Posted on Sat, 17 Feb 2024

Plutin, Putinpot and Putin - all names for the Russian horned devil. Always good to read another Muggins take on Mother Russia. I am sure that, when the time comes, Saint Peter will turn the despot away and have him duly arrested. The whole...

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Posted in Pearly Gates : A Tour of Russia’s Hell by Alfred N.Muggins Part 1

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Catharsis is a common reason

Posted on Sat, 17 Feb 2024

Catharsis is a common reason for writing. It's what brought me back to creative writing a few years ago. Maybe the gun is a metaphor, maybe it's real. Some pain never goes away and it becomes a question of finding an outlet for it along with...

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Posted in Killing the killers

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"..rivulets flowed down from

Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2024

"..rivulets flowed down from high,
thrill of an early primrose,
daffodil leaves
and seas of snowdrops on banks.."

I love the way you take everything in when on your walks, Rhiannon. You have an eye for nature and beauty...

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Posted in Up on the Mortimer Trail

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Oh yes - nicely done. The

Posted on Tue, 13 Feb 2024

Oh yes - nicely done. The note disappearing works really well. 

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Posted in "Life is but a Dream"

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Well written and conceived,

Posted on Tue, 13 Feb 2024

Well written and conceived, Penny. Just a thought but how would a hologram leave a handwritten note? I'm sure there's a coherent explanation in this twilight world of sci fi you have conjured.

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Posted in "Life is but a Dream"

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We use plastic heat pads that

Posted on Tue, 13 Feb 2024

We use plastic heat pads that get warmed in the microwave. When they fall out of bed they make a banging noise as they hit the floor. There's nothing more comfy than taking a hot water bottle or something similar with you at night. I could relate...

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Posted in Feeling to find it

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