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I have 275 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1335420 times and 371 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1716 of my 5,319 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1760 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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With or Without You

We promise ourselves to remember…always. Sometimes memories can eventually be washed away like sandcastles on a beach… Dan Foley had waited for this...
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Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)

This is the story I read live at the ABC Reading on 26 th August 2021. I understand not everyone could hear it due to technical issues so here is an...
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Cherry

Ballerina Toy Box

The boundary between the real and imagined world can be a thin veil Daylight fades, an ethereal twilight descends, I turn the key, music tinkles like...
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Kabul Airport

https://www.independent.co.uk/asia/south-asia/afghanistan-latest-kabul-a... https://www.fr24news.com/a/2021/08/children-orphaned-as-their-parents-cr...
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Leaving Home

Rain falls as drizzle – recalcitrant, obstinate, framing a doorway filled by fretful parents, staring into a no man’s land of sadness, one last,...
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1716 of my comments have received 1760 Great Feedback votes

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It's another irrestible mix

Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024

It's another irrestible mix of magic and intrigue. Looking forward to reading more :)

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There's a sense of euphoria

Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024

There's a sense of euphoria at the story's climax. Yet still the frailties of the human condition shine through. As ever, you lead the reader through a tale that reads like a modern fable. Enjoyed as always.

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Posted in How much is still left

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"I’m learning how to shear

Posted on Fri, 13 Sep 2024

"I’m learning how to shear alpacas.." That's exactly the kind of thing my daughter would do!

The family dynamics are done so well, Jane. Vanessa's relationship with her quirky offspring and the nuances of how this contrasts with the...

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Posted in Parcel for You.. - Part 34

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That's a big twist and the

Posted on Tue, 10 Sep 2024

That's a big twist for the Muggins time-travel saga. Waves of immigration from the past! I can't wait to read what happens next. Can Henry VIII re-take his kingdom in another time? Read on. And I will!

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Posted in The Courtier From The 21st Century Who Would Be King : The King Behind The Throne : King Henry VIII (Alfred the Great II) : Ch.7 by Alfred Muggins (himself) The Real Henry VIII Finds His Feet In 21st Century England! Ch.7 Part 1

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"..bring peace in some

Posted on Thu, 12 Sep 2024

"..bring peace in some measure where there’s fighting now.." Wise words, Rhiannon. And more relevant than ever with the conflicts currently ongoing.

I so hope that "..love will flow earthwide.."

Beautifully expressed words.

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Posted in All related

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That's an evocative poem,

Posted on Thu, 12 Sep 2024

That's an evocative poem, Jenny. A pen-picture beautifully drawn as always. Just lovely.

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Posted in Escape To Ridgeway

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Another wonderfully unique

Posted on Sat, 07 Sep 2024

Another wonderfully unique tale.

That's why this is our Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

Congratulations, Itane.

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Posted in No escape from reality

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It looks odds on that CGT

Posted on Fri, 06 Sep 2024

It looks odds on that CGT will be aligned with personal rates of taxation at 20/40/45% at the next budget. Probably with immediate effect from 30th October. Landlords are already selling up in droves. Labour in Wales are levying 200% council tax...

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Posted in The Bleeding Of Britain and the People (from the Imaginations of Alfred N.Muggins)

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What a brilliantly original

Posted on Sat, 07 Sep 2024

What a brilliantly original notion - the anthropomorphism of the Devil. You do these philosophical musings so well. Life is rarely black and white and was it ever greyer than attributing human frailties to Satan? Loved this.

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Posted in No escape from reality

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Eesh..I've seen images of MRI

Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024

Eesh..I've seen images of MRI scans on the telly. Everyone seems intimidated by them and some folks can't make it all the way through the session. I can only imagine how scary the loud sounds must be. So glad your health issue has been narrowed...

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Posted in Can Life Get Better?

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