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I have 268 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1283785 times and 360 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1680 of my 5,222 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1717 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Punters

This is the fourth entry in the satirical series at https://www.abctales.com/collection/pandemic-tales-bojo-and-co It had been a long, old Pandemic...
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Another Night On a Bare Mountain

Night on a Bare Mountain (aka Night on Bald Mountain) is a series of compositions written by composer Modest Mussorgsky (1839 – 1881). It was only...
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Penalties

On 11 th July 2021 the England Football team lost on penalties to Italy after a 1-1 draw having played extra time in the Final of the Euro2020...
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Steve Mason and the Music Nazi

This is the third entry in the Steve Mason’s School Days at https://www.abctales.com/collection/steve-masons-school-days Steve “Stevo” Mason just...
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Where The Streets Have No Blame

I pass you on the desolate streets, huddled under weather-worn blankets, in dimly lit, dank shop doorways, the smell of wandering urine is acidic,...

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1680 of my comments have received 1717 Great Feedback votes

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"..like the skilled

Posted on Sun, 04 Aug 2024

"..like the skilled

artistry of writers with their nimble

fingers.."

One of my great pleasures in life is watching bees doing their dance of pollination especially amongst the lavender bushes in my front and back gardens. I...

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Posted in Bee Muse

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"He felt like an honourary

Posted on Fri, 02 Aug 2024

"He felt like an honourary Frenchman, having eaten two Croissants for breakfast with jam and marmalade respectively, and a banana."

I haven't watched much of the Olympics but Alfred had brought the opening ceremony to life with his vivid...

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Posted in Alfred N.Muggins Becomes An Honourary Frenchman After Watching The Opening Ceremony Of The Olympics!

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"With a book in my hand and

Posted on Fri, 02 Aug 2024

"With a book in my hand and demonic android device in my bin, that’ll be the day that I die" Amen to that.

"..dancing ourselves dizzy in vests and pants whilst calling each other ‘you crazy ho’." Good Lord..

"But Crado didn’t come...

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Posted in Crado Come Home

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"Hang a budding branch

Posted on Thu, 01 Aug 2024

"Hang a budding branch

watch it slowly turn to gold.."

Only we can reflect its light. Maybe so.

A poem with a lining of philosophical musing running all the way through it. Enjoyed.

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Posted in The World as it Might Have Been

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Ludogorets v Dinamo Batumi -

Posted on Thu, 01 Aug 2024

Ludogorets v Dinamo Batumi - damn...I missed that one.

And Archie Gray to Spurs. I still remember Eddie Gray playing for the lillywhites.

I like the sound of the July Morning. It sounds quite a festival.

That intro "Afternoon...

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Posted in All the President’s Biscuits

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"Whiter than white’ – “look

Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2024

"Whiter than white’ – “look at me” insolent
silent shriek.."

Such drama in your vignette, Rhiannon.

The ever evolving struggle between flora.

We intervene where we can, of course.

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Posted in Garden bindweed, again

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"..like echoes that

Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2024

"..like echoes that

reach through time give

sweet new beginnings to

future minds..."

 

An elegant moving poem for such an awful incident.

Crimes committed that take the lives of young ones are amongst the...

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Posted in Hold fast To Love

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"Tonight –  the full moon, is

Posted on Mon, 29 Jul 2024

"Tonight –  the full moon, is the Uposatha, 
when we will meditate until the dawn..."

That's a wonderfully, evocative poem.

Another philosophical journey through life.

Adriotly done, Dougie.

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Posted in Memento Mori

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Great story.

Posted on Mon, 29 Jul 2024

Great story.

Not sure if you are looking to continue or if it's standalone but it does lend itself to more.

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Posted in P.O.D

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"‘I like Stuart’s bandana,’

Posted on Thu, 25 Jul 2024

"‘I like Stuart’s bandana,’ Vanessa shouted over to Pat. This wasn’t a truthful statement, the bandana looked absurd and she quickly took a swig of warm beer to obscure her lying face..."

Straight in with humour :O)

Lots of very...

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Posted in Parcel for you - Part 31

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