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I have 277 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1401282 times and 375 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1749 of my 5,400 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1800 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Giant Redwoods

Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/giant-redwoods-mp3 Shafts of silver light cascade at twilight, a canopy bordering an evening...
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Cherry

Autumn

Autumn The Harvest Moon will reach peak illumination on Monday, September 20 The Autumn Equinox is on Wednesday 22 nd September 2021 Moonlight lunar...
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With or Without You

We promise ourselves to remember…always. Sometimes memories can eventually be washed away like sandcastles on a beach… Dan Foley had waited for this...
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Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)

This is the story I read live at the ABC Reading on 26 th August 2021. I understand not everyone could hear it due to technical issues so here is an...
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Cherry

Ballerina Toy Box

The boundary between the real and imagined world can be a thin veil Daylight fades, an ethereal twilight descends, I turn the key, music tinkles like...
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1749 of my comments have received 1800 Great Feedback votes

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"Searing flares of reflection

Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2024

"Searing flares of reflection 

ignite the darkest corners 

of memories held.."

There's a certain cathartic feeling when reading this that swirls around the dreaminess. Smoke and fire metaphors in themselves and laid bare by...

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Posted in Watching the Fire

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'Neighbour Hasan expressed

Posted on Mon, 11 Nov 2024

'Neighbour Hasan expressed gratitude for my gift of discarded bits of the old roof. He smiled the radiant smile of a man with his woodshed already full in October. He has more teeth than most Gypsies.'

You bring the characters to life in...

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Posted in Seven Roofers Roofing

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It's always a relief to get a

Posted on Thu, 07 Nov 2024

It's always a relief to get a hospital procedure out of the way. So glad you are on the other side now, Jenny. Wishing you are a speedy recovery and I'm sure it will all have been worth it. Write again when you are ready. We will all be waiting...

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Posted in Hip Op The Second

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I guess with the oppressive

Posted on Sat, 09 Nov 2024

I guess with the oppressive regime in Afghanistan and the anti-abortion lobby in the US scorching the earth it's exceptionally tough for women in parts of the world. The word 'freedom' has never had more relevance. Well said, Maxine.

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Posted in LAWS.

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'All of them I said..." Well,

Posted on Sat, 09 Nov 2024

'All of them I said..." Well, yes!

That's a wonderfully beguiling poem

 

[Should there be just one 'her' in the line....."the sun pixelating her her hair"?]

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Posted in A different way to measure time

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Ach...Alfred will always come

Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2024

Ach...Alfred will always come out on top regardless. He's a talented fella and can't be put down for long.

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Posted in On the Shelf Again, so to speak! By Alfred N.Muggins

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Not sure I've ever been to

Posted on Sun, 10 Nov 2024

Not sure I've ever been to Sheffield. It sounds like most cities. When I go back to Birmingham the centre has changed again with a never ending 'road improvement scheme'.

Maybe Di's right....a metaphor for life :)

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Posted in Running the Gauntlet : Paranoid and Harrassed In The City Of His Birth! By Alfred N.Muggins

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"What began it, or what

Posted on Thu, 07 Nov 2024

"What began it, or what atavistic

thing we are atoning for forever, unknown."

I had to look up 'atavistic'.

Love this poem. So evocative with sound echoes from history.

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Posted in East Coast Scotland (Reflection)

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This flows better than the

Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2024

This flows better than the version posted last year (I've just re-read it) so well done on this revision. Your poem captures the essense of this time of year including its religious connotations and associations.

I enjoyed this.

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Posted in Al Hallows Eve

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I feel like I need to see Bow

Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2024

I feel like I need to see Bow-Fiddle Rock now.

That's a charming tale well told with its Hallowe’en trickster-dixstering.

Really enjoyed this.

Happy Halloween!

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Posted in Bus Pass on a Secret Trail

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