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I have 276 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1367152 times and 373 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1730 of my 5,354 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1778 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

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Autumn

Autumn The Harvest Moon will reach peak illumination on Monday, September 20 The Autumn Equinox is on Wednesday 22 nd September 2021 Moonlight lunar...
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With or Without You

We promise ourselves to remember…always. Sometimes memories can eventually be washed away like sandcastles on a beach… Dan Foley had waited for this...
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Cherry

Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)

This is the story I read live at the ABC Reading on 26 th August 2021. I understand not everyone could hear it due to technical issues so here is an...
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Cherry

Ballerina Toy Box

The boundary between the real and imagined world can be a thin veil Daylight fades, an ethereal twilight descends, I turn the key, music tinkles like...
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Kabul Airport

https://www.independent.co.uk/asia/south-asia/afghanistan-latest-kabul-a... https://www.fr24news.com/a/2021/08/children-orphaned-as-their-parents-cr...
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1730 of my comments have received 1778 Great Feedback votes

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Gorgeous pics.

Posted on Tue, 01 Oct 2024

Gorgeous pics.

A sweeping vignette that shows again how connected you are to nature and the seasons, Rhiannon.

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Posted in Seasons’ Round

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"...and on the top of the

Posted on Wed, 02 Oct 2024

"...and on the top of the little ridge
view eastward to Clee Hill
and south to the Malverns."

Another wonderfully visual ramble with you, Rhiannon. I was right there with you. Lovely pics, as usual :)

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Posted in Above CravenArms 29/9/24

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That's a wonderful poem as

Posted on Thu, 03 Oct 2024

That's a wonderful poem as the introduction.

As always, a beautifully crafted travelogue laced with humour. You bring the sites, sights and sounds to life so evocatively.

I stayed at Hersonissus years ago and loved Crete. It's a...

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Posted in The Old Man and the Libyan Sea

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Another wonderful nature poem

Posted on Mon, 30 Sep 2024

Another wonderful nature poem, Jenny. Almost Gothic (which I love).

The last stanza is ethereal and...well...perfect.

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Posted in Visions Carried On The Wind

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Nicely done, Ed. You capture

Posted on Mon, 30 Sep 2024

Nicely done, Ed. You capture the mythology of Egypt adeptly and vividly. Enjoyed this.

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Posted in KHEPRI

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Vanessa entering her daughter

Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024

Vanessa entering her daughter's bedroom resonated with me. I wandered about like a lost lamb in a similar fashion when my little girl went to Uni. I like the half-hearted attempt to make the room look neater.

Spencer's literal...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 35

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"...the foamy pond of their

Posted on Thu, 19 Sep 2024

"...the foamy pond of their comrades.

Their tumid insides screaming..." 

That's a deep introspection of how little boys are. Some wonderful lines, imagery and metaphor. Perhaps the most depraved is a wolf. Just maybe.

Enjoyed...

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Posted in How boys play

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Thank you for referencing one

Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024

Thank you for referencing one of my favourites authors. I read quite a bit of RLS when I was younger.

There's a beautiful flow to this matching the theme with interesting questions asked that we often think but rarely articulate.

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Posted in Visible signs of the invisible

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"..delicious blackberry and

Posted on Tue, 17 Sep 2024

"..delicious blackberry and apple crumble
for Sunday lunch!"

From tree to plate - a journey documented so well and so elegantly. My mouth was watering by the end and those photos are yummy.

Adriotly penned, Rhiannon :)

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Posted in Delicious harvest

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"There is an earthy romance

Posted on Tue, 17 Sep 2024

"There is an earthy romance of song in early autumn’s golden hour.."

What a wonderful opening line. Blends beautifully into a haunting tale. The poem lingers long after being read. Immaculate, Lena.

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Posted in M'Appari

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