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I have 214 stories published in 27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 473440 times and 286 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1341 of my 4,338 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1357 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Ashes To Ashes

It was dark in the beginning; a neutrino sat suspended in a vast array of nothingness. All things of real matter were frozen in an inanimate void of space and time. It was impossible to explain this vacuum -'it simply was

Private Heaven

Memnock had waited for a thousand years. At least, he thought it was a thousand years but it could have been much longer than that; he didn't wear a watch after all.
Cherry

Chinese Whispers

I guess there was no way of knowing that things would turn out like this. As I stood and stared out across the moonlit, mountain vista, I reflected back on what had led up to this moment. When you're a mile high in the sky the air seems so much clearer and your thoughts become crystallised like a moth caught in an arctic freeze.
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A Working Complaint

It's been a hard day's night, And I've been working like a dog,

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1341 of my comments have received 1357 Great Feedback votes

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Good to see you back, bhi.

Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2023

Good to see you back, bhi. This one is dense, absorbing and in an original format for a poem. A worthy continuation of the "This Life" theme. Paul

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Posted in (This Life) Part 10 – Chapter 1: The Dream Catcher’s Tale

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"...in faded, bloodied

Posted on Fri, 07 Jul 2023

"...in faded, bloodied parchment

and scarcely discernible runes."

Love this poem. An evocative journey through a dark forest with such descriptive language.

 

 

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Posted in We

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"...whose whims must be

Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2023

"...whose whims must be obeyed."

 

The reality for many. There's a great rhythm and rhyme to this, Rhiannon. It bounces along and is a lovely read. Nicely done. Paul 

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Posted in Escape into dream jobs

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Those English stag parties

Posted on Wed, 05 Jul 2023

Those English stag parties get everywhere even if they fizzle out by mid-afternoon. As entertaining as ever and heaving with interesting details nestled amongst the humour. You should write travelogies for a living. Adriotly done. Paul

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Posted in The Bratislava Pálava - Part Two of Two

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"Mistaken mind

Posted on Tue, 04 Jul 2023

"Mistaken mind

disaster brought."

A cautionary tale and a profound message. Nicely done, Rhiannon. Paul 

 

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Posted in The Rebel’s Regrets

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Another lovely diary reverie,

Posted on Tue, 04 Jul 2023

Another lovely diary reverie, Jenny. Evocative images from a stunning part of the world. Paul :) 

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Posted in It's Too Late For Things Missed

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Another enjoyable travelogue.

Posted on Mon, 03 Jul 2023

Another enjoyable travelogue. Your humour lifts these pieces to another level. Looking forward to reading more. Paul

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Posted in The Bratislava Pálava - Part One of Two

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Those last four words are so

Posted on Sun, 02 Jul 2023

Those last four words are so ominous..but true. Adriotly done, Penny. Paul

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Posted in "Dwindling Ancient Forests"

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Let's hope this dream remains

Posted on Sun, 02 Jul 2023

Let's hope this dream remains just that....a bad dream. A lots happened since Alfred's holiday to Turkey. Hopefully, Plutin's days are numbered now!

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Posted in Alfred N.Muggins has a Bad Dream : Brinkmanship (Inside the Mind of Vladimir Plutin : Victory For Russia!)

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"Jam on the chairs, and

Posted on Fri, 30 Jun 2023

"Jam on the chairs, and

jam on the doors."

 

There's a sense of sticky mischievousness in this vignette, Rhiannon. Enjoyed, of course. Paul :) 

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Posted in How far can a little stickiness spread?

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