marandina

Primary tabs

I have 272 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1312274 times and 366 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1699 of my 5,273 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1742 votes

Trusted critic
marandina's picture
Paul

I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Gold cherry

Kabul Airport

https://www.independent.co.uk/asia/south-asia/afghanistan-latest-kabul-a... https://www.fr24news.com/a/2021/08/children-orphaned-as-their-parents-cr...
1 likes
Gold cherry

Leaving Home

Rain falls as drizzle – recalcitrant, obstinate, framing a doorway filled by fretful parents, staring into a no man’s land of sadness, one last,...
1 likes
Gold cherry
Poem of the week

Saccades of Sands

A clicking camera shutter, perpetual saccades, capturing fleeting moments that mark epochs, littered in sentiment and seminal occasions,...
Cherry

Dreams of Rain

A wind-swept, seeping rain dances on bedroom windows, houses opposite obscured – streets are empty, twilight gloom broken by neon street lamps –...
1 likes
Gold cherry

Punters

This is the fourth entry in the satirical series at https://www.abctales.com/collection/pandemic-tales-bojo-and-co It had been a long, old Pandemic...

Pages

1699 of my comments have received 1742 Great Feedback votes

1 Vote

The meek shall inherit the

Posted on Sat, 24 Aug 2024

The meek shall inherit the earth via the lens of mobile phone cameras.

Adriotly done, as always. Great story, great ending. 

Read full comment

Posted in The meek shall inherit the earth

1 Vote

Some interesting thoughts

Posted on Thu, 22 Aug 2024

Some interesting thoughts from Alfred.

Yes, challenges aplenty for the new government.

I think I saw that Starmer is giving a speech next week talking about a 'societal black hole' to be sorted - another legacy inherited from the...

Read full comment

Posted in Is Britain About To Have Its Own Revolution? Asks Alfred N.Muggins

1 Vote

"Look into the flames, and

Posted on Wed, 21 Aug 2024

"Look into the flames, and what do you see?
    Horses and dragons flash in and flee.."

There's a lovely rhythm to this, the words bounced along inside my head.

So many images contained and imagined. A lovely creative piece is...

Read full comment

Posted in Pareidolia

1 Vote

"This heat could make Prince

Posted on Sat, 17 Aug 2024

"This heat could make Prince Andrew sweat.." Yikes...that IS hot!

We are about to get the remnants of Hurricane Ernesto here. Temp is 20Cish. That's what you get for living on a wet and windy island.

"Bulgaria’s hot like a half-time...

Read full comment

Posted in No Country for Cold Men

1 Vote

"..family of swans, eight

Posted on Sun, 18 Aug 2024

"..family of swans, eight

fluffy infants must be cared for.."

This reminds me of West Hunsbury Country Park near me.

That's a bucolic poem and a lovely pic, Jenny. Just lovely :)

 

Read full comment

Posted in Caught In Charm Of What I See

1 Vote

"..he should try to persuade

Posted on Mon, 19 Aug 2024

"..he should try to persuade Mrs Muggins to opt for a holiday in France soon, perhaps even next year..." Let us know if Mrs Muggins goes along with it.

"..Unfortunately Alfred has run out of croissants.." and I hope Alfred found more...

Read full comment

Posted in Alfred N.Muggins Becomes An Honourary Frenchman After Watching The Opening Ceremony Of The Olympics! : Part 2

1 Vote

That's a creepy story so well

Posted on Sat, 17 Aug 2024

That's a creepy story so well told. Very original and very nicely done.

Read full comment

Posted in Death where is your sting?

1 Vote

Well said.

Posted on Fri, 16 Aug 2024

Well said.

I saw a piece on the news last night about schools in Scotland making children hand in their mobiles and 'park' them in a holder at the front of the classroom before each lesson. Even the kids themselves say that they can't...

Read full comment

Posted in A Martian Sends a Postcard Home 2024

1 Vote

"..While the beauty of

Posted on Thu, 15 Aug 2024

"..While the beauty of flowers craves the soft touch of truth..."

The poem reads like a metaphor - a world full of anguish juxtaposed against a lament for the neglected beauty of nature. I read it a few times. I really like the layers and...

Read full comment

Posted in Conditions That Please or Displease Flowers

1 Vote

"...let’s call her Vanessa,

Posted on Thu, 15 Aug 2024

"...let’s call her Vanessa, because that was her name.."

You should be on the stage with your comic timing.

An encounter that could have come from an Alan Bleasdale piece. It did make me think of Yosser Hughes and the like. Giz a...

Read full comment

Posted in Benches & Hedges

Pages