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I have 264 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1254196 times and 356 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1658 of my 5,164 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1695 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

Cherry

Where The Streets Have No Blame

I pass you on the desolate streets, huddled under weather-worn blankets, in dimly lit, dank shop doorways, the smell of wandering urine is acidic,...
Gold cherry

Estival Solstice

21 st June 2021 is the day of the Summer Solstice As dawn’s first light skims skies, revealing an incandescent ball of fire, rising beyond a Heel...
Cherry

Cherry Tree

Dedicated to the cherry tree in my front garden. It brings me much joy. Audio version at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/cherry-tree-mp3 In the...
Gold cherry

Roy Batty (Tears in Rain)

This is a tribute to Roy Batty played by the late Rutger Hauer from one of my favourite movies - Blade Runner (1982) https://bladerunner.fandom.com/...
Cherry

The Sure Yank Redemption

This is a sequel to: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/most-vial The jet plane roared as it penetrated trans-Atlantic airspace. The ocean rose...

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1658 of my comments have received 1695 Great Feedback votes

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Was talking about Putin only

Posted on Thu, 18 Jul 2024

Was talking about Putin only yesterday. History has a habit of repeating itself so I wondered whether he would be airbrushed from history in the same way Stalin was in Russia after his death. I'm sure they would make good soul brothers if they...

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Posted in Pearly Gates : A Tour of Russia’s Hell by Alfred N.Muggins Part 3

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"Vanessa suddenly remembered

Posted on Tue, 16 Jul 2024

"Vanessa suddenly remembered what Cher sounded like with autotune.." Made me laugh...I think I know the song you are referring to.

You have built up to this latest set-piece so well. I can only imagine how Spencer will get on at a festival...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 29

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Well at least Masoud

Posted on Tue, 16 Jul 2024

Well at least Masoud Pezeshkian won the run-off to become the President in Iran. A relative moderate, he now needs to dial down the influence of the Theocrats. Let's hope it leads to better relations with the West and other countries in that...

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Posted in An Easter Message Of Confusion from Alfred N.Muggins Part 3

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"..don’t bring your sister

Posted on Mon, 15 Jul 2024

"..don’t bring your sister

she’s too Jung to go."

Ah yes, cleverly done and very entertaining to read.

 

I imagine this is intended below in the way the words merge together? You are so creative with your poetry so...

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Posted in An Anarchist Evening at the Magic Theatre

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Nicely paced as always and a

Posted on Sat, 13 Jul 2024

Nicely paced as always and a meaningful finale. A pleasure to read.

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Posted in The things we do for love

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Thanks for those links, Di.

Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024

Thanks for those links, Di.

I guess the shopping list of issues to be resolved will always be weighty. Human beings are a deeply flawed species. On the upside, young people seem to be more aware and in touch with things like environmental...

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Posted in "For, being green, there is great hope" (quote from Shakespeare's HENRY VI PART 2, ACT 3 SCENE 1)

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I really like this poem. I

Posted on Fri, 12 Jul 2024

I really like this poem. I have read it a few times to get between the layers. My literal interpretation is of a statue that's neglected but I imagine there are metaphors at work here.

 

Either way, it's beautifully done.

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Posted in The Broken Lady

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"..but the roots are odd and

Posted on Thu, 11 Jul 2024

"..but the roots are odd and strong
and they want to stay, belong.."

One of my least favourite things - visiting the dentist.

You have my sympathies and hopefully you are on the mend and fully recovered, Rhiannon. Yes,...

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Posted in Extract!

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"I will devour each day and

Posted on Thu, 11 Jul 2024

"I will devour each day and stay

steadfast, unfettered...holding

onto my desires and dreams"

This comes across as reflective, Jenny. Maybe you have crossed the border to a new phase of your life.

Your talent for...

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Posted in Holding Onto My Desires And Dreams

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"A brambletoad, turbid with

Posted on Thu, 11 Jul 2024

"A brambletoad, turbid with siltblood,

now I dreambeetle by moon's waters.."

Wonderful use of language, of course. And soaked in lore and magic.

"I promise

nothing"

...but your poem delivers everything :)

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Posted in Natterjack

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