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I have 248 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1133398 times and 336 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1592 of my 4,983 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1618 votes

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I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

The Banquet (Competition entry max 1,000 words)

I live in a mansion in the country. This is no ordinary mansion; it’s an M&S mansion. Well, it’s not actually but it does house a library of...

Happy Valentines

I always did love Sadie. We were your typical childhood sweethearts who grew up and eventually got married. It was aged 12 when we shared a naive...
Gold cherry

Mehtab Bagh (Moonlight Garden)

We met on the mezzanine, lobby of splendour and gold, our bearded, mystic Hindu guide, spirited tourists into seats. Passed meandering, sacred cows,...

The Theory of Everything (take 2)

I originally posted this piece a few days ago. I had this half-arsed notion that I needed to put something up on my birthday and a rare foray to...
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Gold cherry

A Secret Forest

We landed at Marco Polo, Azzurri gateway to the North, clutching passports we passed bleary-eyed through mundane border checks, as luggage rolled...

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1592 of my comments have received 1618 Great Feedback votes

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It's great to read another

Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2024

It's great to read another Alfred Muggins story. I'm sure Mrs Muggins must have looked fetching in her new pink cowgirl hat. Hoping there's a part 2 to follow...

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Posted in Trips Down Memory Lane Before The World Falls Apart by Alfred N.Muggins

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‘That’s how you got home,

Posted on Sat, 13 Apr 2024

‘That’s how you got home, Annie, petrol. It got you home didn’t it.’ That made me laugh. The dialogue is compelling. You must have a lot of fun visualising the interactions between the characters you have created including Spencer, of course. The...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 23

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It's nice to imagine Captain

Posted on Thu, 11 Apr 2024

It's nice to imagine Captain Sensible with his infamous parrot singing "Happy Talk" on TOTP as part of a computer processing thoughts and songs. I know it's a cover but it's the version that stands out. For me anyway but then I love The Damned....

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Posted in Mono Log

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Dr Kruschev - wasn't he the

Posted on Tue, 09 Apr 2024

Dr Kruschev - wasn't he the Russian president at some point in the past? There seems to be many links between Bulgaria and Russia.

Good to see your adopted country in the Shengen Area. I like the thought of those storks flying wherever...

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Posted in This Sort of Thing - March 2024 - La finale

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"Today was Liberation Day.

Posted on Mon, 08 Apr 2024

"Today was Liberation Day. The 146th anniversary of us being freed from the Ottoman Yoke. We wave Russian flags because they helped us. In September we have Independence Day when we despise Russians." The contradiction is to be applauded and I...

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Posted in This Sort of Thing - March 2024 - L'ouverture

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I like the ambiguity of the

Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2024

I like the ambiguity of the finale. So who DID write the poem? Very nicely done, of course.

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Posted in Dad's poet society

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“Am I never to turn heads?”

Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2024

“Am I never to turn heads?” She

flashes her father with a grieving

glance..."

 

There's an enigmatic quality that fits an ekphrastic piece very nicely. Enjoyed, Jenny :)

 

[Should that say "..to lose...

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Posted in In A Troubled Land

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A ramble in bucolic

Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2024

A ramble in bucolic countryside in sight of the Black Mountains is just what we need at this time of year. A wonderful evocation of springtime makes this our Facebook and X Pick of the Day! Please do share it round.

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Posted in Above Peterchurch, east of the Black Mountains

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Another wonderful ramble

Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2024

Another wonderful ramble through bucolic scenery. You have a keen eye for appreciating the beauty of nature, Rhiannon.

I was out walking in Braunston on Monday and it was lovely to see spring lambs in the fields.

A lovely poem,...

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Posted in Above Peterchurch, east of the Black Mountains

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That's a clever story, Jane.

Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2024

That's a clever story, Jane.

Funnily enough, I was reading a story somewhere the other day about the existence of avatars that can be trained to mimic people when they are alive then shown to future generations after their death. A kind of...

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Posted in Erazofuge

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