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I have 220 stories published in 27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 523596 times and 295 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1378 of my 4,439 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1391 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

1378 of my comments have received 1391 Great Feedback votes

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"I'm a chocolate teapot

Posted on Tue, 18 Jul 2023

"I'm a chocolate teapot

looking swell.."

 

I had the "I'm a little teapot" rhythm swirling through my head as I read this. "As useful as a chocolate teapot.." is a saying that always makes me smile. Nicely done, of course,...

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Posted in ‘As useful as a chocolate teapot!'

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Thanks for reading it, insert

Posted on Mon, 17 Jul 2023

Thanks for reading it, insert. And the feedback much appreciated. Yes, I have just sent Rachel a note to say I can read if people still want to listen to my stuff. Looking forward to the event. Paul :) 

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Posted in Dragon Gate

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Devils food cake sounds

Posted on Mon, 17 Jul 2023

Devils food cake sounds outstanding. Another enjoyable reverie, Jenny. And a yummy one too. Nicely done. Paul 

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Posted in Shadowy Visions Of The Past

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"...lilting and lifting

Posted on Fri, 14 Jul 2023

"...lilting and lifting

song and refrain."

 

Definitely music through words. A catchy vignette, nicely done Rhiannon. Enjoyed. Paul 

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Posted in Word-music

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The relocation of demons

Posted on Wed, 12 Jul 2023

The relocation of demons elsewhere made me think of the refugee crisis.. And the Dark Materials trilogy. It feels like there's a few metaphors circling in this particular story. Enjoyed and it made think. Which is good. 

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Posted in Cleanser of Demons

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Thanks for reading, Ewan. I

Posted on Wed, 12 Jul 2023

Thanks for reading, Ewan. I didn't know that about the Red Sea. The historian finished the tour with all the different theories about why it was the "Red" Castle. I think it came down to the stones turning that colour due to reacting with the...

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Posted in Castell Coch (Red Castle)

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"...my imagination submits to

Posted on Tue, 11 Jul 2023

"...my imagination submits to

interchanging domains;"

Isn't it wonderful to have imagination sparked in nature like that. Another enjoyable diary entry. Nicely done, Jenny. Paul

 

 

Lovely photo

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Posted in Every Picture Tells A Story

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Good to see you back, bhi.

Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2023

Good to see you back, bhi. This one is dense, absorbing and in an original format for a poem. A worthy continuation of the "This Life" theme. Paul

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Posted in (This Life) Part 10 – Chapter 1: The Dream Catcher’s Tale

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"...in faded, bloodied

Posted on Fri, 07 Jul 2023

"...in faded, bloodied parchment

and scarcely discernible runes."

Love this poem. An evocative journey through a dark forest with such descriptive language.

 

 

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"...whose whims must be

Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2023

"...whose whims must be obeyed."

 

The reality for many. There's a great rhythm and rhyme to this, Rhiannon. It bounces along and is a lovely read. Nicely done. Paul 

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Posted in Escape into dream jobs

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