marandina

Primary tabs

I have 220 stories published in 27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 536004 times and 296 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1389 of my 4,456 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1402 votes

Trusted critic
marandina's picture
Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

1389 of my comments have received 1402 Great Feedback votes

1 Vote

"...The dying moment,

Posted on Tue, 14 Mar 2023

"...The dying moment,

easily confused

with a stopped clock."

 

Melancholic, wistful and existential. All things that make a good poem. Nicely done, for sure.

Read full comment

Posted in Inklings

1 Vote

"...fragile early wood wild

Posted on Wed, 15 Mar 2023

"...fragile early wood wild daffodil.."

Synonymous with spring. A beautiful image, Rhiannon. Lovely photo as well. Who doesn't love daffodils?! Paul

 

Read full comment

Posted in A few early wild daffodils in the woods

1 Vote

A tragic and sad story. Hard

Posted on Tue, 14 Mar 2023

A tragic and sad story. Hard to imagine the harshness of those kind of laws now. You recount the tale and speak up for the wronged so eloquently. 

Read full comment

Posted in Newes From The Dead

1 Vote

You have found something of a

Posted on Sun, 12 Mar 2023

You have found something of a niche with these stripped-back tales, Mark. For so few words, the images are vivid and the story profound. Very nicely done. Paul

Read full comment

Posted in the ward

1 Vote

Thanks for reading, CM.

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023

Thanks for reading, CM. Always appreciated and, yes, right on both counts. (Good win in the cup today for the Bhoys. Treble on. Hail hail) 

Read full comment

Posted in Spring Skies (After the Dogs of Winter)

1 Vote

I have a cherry tree in my

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023

I have a cherry tree in my front garden. I wrote a poem about it a while back. It's a wonder to see the cherry blossom every year. Enjoyed your poem. Paul 

Read full comment

Posted in Cherry Tree

1 Vote

Great last line, Hilary! Yes

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023

Great last line, Hilary! Yes those pesky birds. Enjoyed the story. Paul :)

Read full comment

Posted in The Garden of Songbird Charm Part Two

1 Vote

What a beautiful world you

Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023

What a beautiful world you have conjured, Hilary. Off to read part 2!

Read full comment

Posted in The Garden of Songbird Charm

1 Vote

Enjoying the role swap.

Posted on Thu, 09 Mar 2023

Enjoying the role swap. Looking forward to see what they both get up to! :) 

Read full comment

Posted in The Courtier From The 21st Century Who Would Be King : The King Behind The Throne : King Henry VIII (Alfred the Great II) : Ch.2 by Alfred Muggins (himself)

1 Vote

"...dreamy raindrops like

Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2023

"...dreamy raindrops like pearls

of wisdom trickling down

her pane,"

 

A dreamy meditation full of beautiful imagery. Is the name "Rosa" significant? It feels like a reference to a book or a film. Anyway, enjoyed :)

Read full comment

Posted in Every Moment Counts

Pages