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I have 220 stories published in 27 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 527159 times and 296 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1383 of my 4,447 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1396 votes

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I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

My stories

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Steve Mason and the Last Day of School (Part Two of Two)

Part One at: https://www.abctales.com/story/marandina/steve-mason-and-last-day-school-part-one-two Steve Mason and the Last Day of School (Part Two...
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Cherry

Steve Mason and the Last Day of School (Part One of Two)

This is the fourth entry in the series of stories at: https://www.abctales.com/collection/steve-masons-school-days Steve Mason and the Last Day of...
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Cherry

North of Taiga

North of Taiga At sunrise over bleak horizons, breath frozen in an arctic tundra, winds skitter in scattered trees, seasons dream of warmer days...
Cherry

Second Life

Rewritten story Second Life Snow fell like frozen tears from colourless skies; windows frosted over in the cold. A shadow shifted on the kitchen wall...
Cherry

A Murder of Crows

A Murder of Crows Clouds brood under dark skies billowing black as coal dust, hung low, pregnant with rain, thunder rumbles like metal sheets in a...
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1383 of my comments have received 1396 Great Feedback votes

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"Beneath this canopy of

Posted on Fri, 30 Aug 2024

"Beneath this canopy of oppression

Suppression, her self-hating cousin"

You have a penchant for using metaphor within nature, Jane. And you do it very well.

Layers within the lines and leaving the reader to arrive at their...

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Posted in Forest in the Brain

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I am one of those who listen

Posted on Sun, 01 Sep 2024

I am one of those who listen to Alfred N.Muggins. He makes a lot of sense.

I see there's a General Strike in Israel now with more calls for a ceasefire with Hamas. I guess there's only so much pain people will endure.

Keep up the...

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Posted in The Man Who Almost Saved The World by Alfred N.Muggins

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Consummate prose, Sean. And

Posted on Sat, 24 Aug 2024

Consummate prose, Sean. And very funny indeed.

That's why it's today's Bank Holiday Facebook and X/Twitter Pick of the Day.

Congratulations and keep going!

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Posted in A Savage Poindexter

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It's nice to be re-united

Posted on Sun, 25 Aug 2024

It's nice to be re-united with a similar texture and feeling to "Willow's Tail".

Coming along nicely.

Keep going! :)

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 16

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The meek shall inherit the

Posted on Sat, 24 Aug 2024

The meek shall inherit the earth via the lens of mobile phone cameras.

Adriotly done, as always. Great story, great ending. 

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Posted in The meek shall inherit the earth

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Some interesting thoughts

Posted on Thu, 22 Aug 2024

Some interesting thoughts from Alfred.

Yes, challenges aplenty for the new government.

I think I saw that Starmer is giving a speech next week talking about a 'societal black hole' to be sorted - another legacy inherited from the...

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Posted in Is Britain About To Have Its Own Revolution? Asks Alfred N.Muggins

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"Look into the flames, and

Posted on Wed, 21 Aug 2024

"Look into the flames, and what do you see?
    Horses and dragons flash in and flee.."

There's a lovely rhythm to this, the words bounced along inside my head.

So many images contained and imagined. A lovely creative piece is...

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Posted in Pareidolia

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"This heat could make Prince

Posted on Sat, 17 Aug 2024

"This heat could make Prince Andrew sweat.." Yikes...that IS hot!

We are about to get the remnants of Hurricane Ernesto here. Temp is 20Cish. That's what you get for living on a wet and windy island.

"Bulgaria’s hot like a half-time...

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Posted in No Country for Cold Men

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"..family of swans, eight

Posted on Sun, 18 Aug 2024

"..family of swans, eight

fluffy infants must be cared for.."

This reminds me of West Hunsbury Country Park near me.

That's a bucolic poem and a lovely pic, Jenny. Just lovely :)

 

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Posted in Caught In Charm Of What I See

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"..he should try to persuade

Posted on Mon, 19 Aug 2024

"..he should try to persuade Mrs Muggins to opt for a holiday in France soon, perhaps even next year..." Let us know if Mrs Muggins goes along with it.

"..Unfortunately Alfred has run out of croissants.." and I hope Alfred found more...

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Posted in Alfred N.Muggins Becomes An Honourary Frenchman After Watching The Opening Ceremony Of The Olympics! : Part 2

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