Mark Burrow

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I have 88 stories published in 4 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 252287 times and 233 of my stories have been cherry picked.
207 of my 1,150 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 217 votes

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Stories. Flash. Works in progress.

My novella, Coo, is published by Alien Buddha Press and can be found here http://tinyurl.com/CooMarkBurrow
 

My stories

Cherry

Shrinkage

Breaking the monotony of lifting boxes
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Cherry

For Bob

Dead on a bench at 38.
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Gold cherry

Namaste

I know I should try counting to ten,
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Cherry

All Architects Are Called Zach (Part 4, words 1,533)

Outside, standing on the balcony, Freddy looked at several pigeons strutting about on the ground below, pecking at a discarded box of chicken and chips.
Cherry

All Architects Are Called Zach (Part 3, words, 1,376)

Drink and food were dad’s priorities. His appetites governed the flat. Freddy watched his dad in the kitchen, pouring beer into a thin glass and then checking the oven to see what was for dinner.

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207 of my comments have received 217 Great Feedback votes

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Read this a few times and

Posted on Mon, 27 Feb 2023

Read this a few times and enjoyed it more with each reading. This is really well done -- for some reason, it reminded me of Tarkovsky's Andrei Rublev. 

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Posted in Triptych

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Nicely done, P and timely. It

Posted on Tue, 21 Feb 2023

Nicely done, P and timely. It's a horrendous mess. I read today that over 800 Russian soldiers are dying a day in Ukraine. Horrific. 

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Posted in Age of Empires

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Hugely evocative and loved

Posted on Tue, 14 Feb 2023

Hugely evocative and loved some of the descriptions. I really like the line about friends not being steadfast, but you still cherish the memories and the times had. It's struck me that memory does seem more important & richer as we grow older...

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Posted in For The Love Of Village Life

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Really enjoyed this. It's

Posted on Mon, 13 Feb 2023

Really enjoyed this. It's slightly bonkers and made me laugh. Both good things in my book. 

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Posted in These are the Legs I Ordered.

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Sadly, they do. 

Posted on Sat, 11 Feb 2023

Sadly, they do. 

Just seen something slightly different in Brighton. Two men in their fifties taking their rather large remote control cars for a spin along the high street. 

Something to do on a Saturday night, I guess. 

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Posted in Execution

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Congrats on this -- well

Posted on Tue, 07 Feb 2023

Congrats on this -- well deserved. 

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Posted in The Edge of Heaven

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It's crazy how on the money

Posted on Tue, 07 Feb 2023

It's crazy how on the money PKD was. 

And I should have said, it's nice to be editing again.

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Posted in The Edge of Heaven

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Really enjoyed this. The

Posted on Tue, 07 Feb 2023

Really enjoyed this. The description of St Thomas' is spot on. Most of all, I loved the interplay of memories. I hope there's more to come. 

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Posted in The Edge of Heaven

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And if you don't have a clue

Posted on Mon, 06 Feb 2023

And if you don't have a clue

pick up your phone and deliveroo

As you can see, I'm not a poet. 

Enjoyed this. 

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Posted in Herbs

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Really strong imagery.

Posted on Sat, 04 Feb 2023

Really strong imagery. Enjoyed this and, being a dog owner, definitely strikes a chord. 

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Posted in two paths (may be distressing)

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