Mark Burrow

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I have 88 stories published in 4 collections on the site.
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Stories. Flash. Works in progress.

My novella, Coo, is published by Alien Buddha Press and can be found here http://tinyurl.com/CooMarkBurrow
 

My stories

Cherry

Tinder – Ch 3 – Dee

My younger brother Mike has a terrific sense of humour. He has this infectious laugh that cracks people up.
Cherry

Tinder – Part 2 – Terry

For the past couple of weeks I had been on at Deirdre to let me have a go. ‘That’s one way traffic,’ she’d say, cackling like a hyena.
Cherry

Tinder

Every kid likes to start a fire. For Christian Cumberbatch, fires went beyond a bit of fun.

Waiting for this

Alan pressed the buzzer. A young girl answered. He liked what greeted him. Short skirt. A tee-shirt showing a firm and sizeable pair - very tidy, he thought, stepping by as she closed the door.
Cherry

You say one thing

As I lay here now, thinking about that night, I wonder about myself. How I let what happened happen.

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207 of my comments have received 217 Great Feedback votes

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Bloody hell. This is great. 

Posted on Tue, 17 Aug 2021

Bloody hell. This is great. 

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Posted in Leaving Home

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Congrats -- this is our Pick

Posted on Tue, 03 Aug 2021

Congrats -- this is our Pick of the Day. Please do share on Facebook and Twitter 

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Posted in Saccades of Sands

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I like how the momentum of

Posted on Tue, 03 Aug 2021

I like how the momentum of this builds in such a controlled, marshalled way, Great imagery. I was there in the park, watching this unfold. 

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Posted in Tiresias and the Birds

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Enjoyed this, M. Ambitious

Posted on Tue, 03 Aug 2021

Enjoyed this, M. Ambitious and well executed. Made me think of the Tibetan Book of the Dead. “Past thinking determines our present status, and our present thinking determines our future status; for we are what we think."

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Posted in Saccades of Sands

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It's really good, Richard.

Posted on Tue, 27 Jul 2021

It's really good, Richard. Strong imagery and a message that rings true. Thanks for posting. 

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Posted in The Wonder of it All

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Enjoyed this poem, Richard. 

Posted on Tue, 27 Jul 2021

Enjoyed this poem, Richard. 

Please share on Facebook and Twitter as this deceptively simple piece us our Pick of the Day. 

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Posted in The Wonder of it All

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I was going to use a pic of a

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

I was going to use a pic of a vending machine! 

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Posted in When Robert Left Helen

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Or "When Helen Left Robert".

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

Or "When Helen Left Robert". This made me laugh. It's nicely done.  

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Posted in When Robert Left Helen

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Brilliantly done. Some great

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

Brilliantly done. Some great turns of phrase but I love "slick of oil at the boundaries of time". 

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Posted in The First Stars

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A nice piece for Bloomsday

Posted on Tue, 15 Jun 2021

A nice piece for Bloomsday Eve. 

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Posted in June 16

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