Miguel De La Cruz
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My stories have been read 27192 times
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Prologue
There I was, in the midst of battle when I heard a great wail of a newborn babe. The sound of the wailing pierced my ears as I plunged my sword in...
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Chapter Two: Homecoming
The Keep Master was infuriated that I overstepped my bounds, and threatened to kick me out. I know him well enough to know he won't follow through,...
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Chapter One: The Hand That Feeds
My life had been a happy one, until the death of my father. Even on his deathbed I was not able to tell him my secrets, the ones that haunted me. I...
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A Songstress' Lore of Lies
Chapter three: here we go again.. "I've come to finish what I started." Mr Devoe reeked of alcohol and cigarettes. He stood there menacing, hitting...
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A Songstress' Lore of Lies
The Songstress' Lore of Lies Chapter 2 The hospital discharged me a couple days later, but I had James bring my make-up work while I stayed. I still...
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Tbh
Posted on Tue, 09 Sep 2014
Too much description for my taste. I like to keep conversations and decriptions balanced. Also, daemons are guardian spirits, right?
Read full commentPosted in The Newgate Witch
Quick thought: careful with
Posted on Wed, 05 Feb 2014
Quick thought: careful with your plot, people will logic a death toll, so prepare for that. if peopke halted there must be airplanes, buses, cars that had people unconcerningly listening, could crash down. If youre working an anarchist plot, dont...
Read full commentPosted in The Day The World Economy Stopped