Pat G
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My stories have been read 73091 times
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19 of my 303 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 19 votes
My stories
Visiting Mom
So much that should have been said, but no longer can be.
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Undercurrents
touches that cause trembles
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Hollow
Sweetness clings in the memory
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Iron: Man
Our Iron: Man stands at a tumescent angle
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Twisted trees
an epoch with a bounty to be paid
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Great. All that storied
Posted on Wed, 23 May 2018
Great. All that storied energy breaking through.
Read full commentPosted in cotyledons
...the only growing is old. I
Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018
...the only growing is old. I like that line of bitter humour in this dark and powerful poem.
Read full commentPosted in wind
inflated with memories
Posted on Sat, 24 Mar 2018
inflated with memories
So much in so few words
Read full commentPosted in One by One
Beautiful writing.
Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018
Beautiful writing.
I love your transition line:
That is how the sky was this evening
facing North leaving the supermarket.
And I love your (correct) punctuation.
Read full commentPosted in Walking home from shopping 8/3/18
I feel the fox padding
Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018
I feel the fox padding through this lively churchyard. Ah, the muck of it all. Fine writing.
Read full commentPosted in Old Dog-Fox In Bleak Midwinter
The first few lines are so
Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2018
The first few lines are so powerful I was hooked. "Hinged with memory" - a great line.
Read full commentPosted in February low tide
You're right, I think, in the
Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2017
You're right, I think, in the sentiment here. The doubts, the questioning, the sadness. I like the break from (marching) form.
Read full commentPosted in Civic Duty
That's cheered me on a rainy
Posted on Thu, 16 Jun 2016
That's cheered me on a rainy day. And I like "froths of elder".
Read full commentPosted in The Hare in the Middle
Great. Now the reader loves
Posted on Sat, 04 Jun 2016
Great. Now the reader loves Uncle Liam too. Use of when at line starts is perfect.
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Makes me feel I am there.
Posted on Wed, 01 Jun 2016
Makes me feel I am there.
Read full commentPosted in Visiting Bury Ditches
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