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Evocative. Reminds of
Posted on Mon, 12 Feb 2024
Evocative. Reminds of 'Sometimes I sits and thinks, and sometimes I just sits' which my mother was fond of quoting. Those without baths must find another haven for just stopping off gird if only for a few moments, like sleep. Clear the mind,...
Read full commentPosted in In the Bath
Wow! so there's a lot of
Posted on Thu, 08 Feb 2024
Wow! so there's a lot of backstory and history here. I hope he's really left it behind, he still seems to know how to act hard. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in New Directions (11)
Hopefully she will gradually
Posted on Wed, 07 Feb 2024
Hopefully she will gradually settle and find the surroundings and people interesting, and her memories of before becoming more hazy, she will become content and happy though maybe still feeling confused. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The Home
It would be better to own up
Posted on Wed, 07 Feb 2024
It would be better to own up to his boss, as he had intended straightening things out, I'd think. Leaving it it might look worse later if he was found out, and it would help for them to sort this forger out together? Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in New Directions (10)
The last two lines are lovely
Posted on Mon, 05 Feb 2024
The last two lines are lovely. But am I right in thinking this is an occasion of scattering ashes? Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in We Watched from the Shore
I like to think I think like
Posted on Sat, 03 Feb 2024
I like to think I think like a child, but, I'm always slow on riddles and puns. It was nice to see the simplicity seen by Joey, nice clue. And yes, the dialogue is very readable. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in "Unwanted Magic" 4
I don't think I'd enjoy
Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2024
I don't think I'd enjoy visiting ancient buildings, espcially highly decorative, but can appreciate the work that has gone into them. I tend ot prefer ruins and open countryside!, but buildings give a guide to the history of the people. Nations (...
Read full commentPosted in The Gaddafi Effect
I like having the chapters
Posted on Thu, 01 Feb 2024
I like having the chapters this legnth.Enough to absorb and doesn't need too long time commitment each time! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in New Directions (8)
That's a perceptive comment,
Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024
That's a perceptive comment, and I guess it is why I love being drawn to notice these things that still are there to be seen, as you say honed down to the basic shape of the branches, tree trunks etc, and as the plant covering is less and weak,...
Read full commentPosted in January Skies
This story must take a lot of
Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024
This story must take a lot of working out, to write each stage carefully, not rushed, patiently working forward at right pace. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in New Directions (7)
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