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I have 1922 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3052518 times and 575 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1392 of my 12,521 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1433 votes

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Cherry

Life's fuel

The farmers tend it, and then they send it to shops, we spend on it, for we depend on it, and … some, corrupt, supplies disrupt, grow rich and fat in greed on that which …
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Wonderful King

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] God pre-eminent we worship, wholly wise and full of grace. He alone can be the Saviour, only He can keep us...
Cherry

Wild weeding

Wildflower spatterings of small dainty flowers – mauve, orange, yellow, blue – dappled and soft; but oh, how they grow, spread, how quickly they...
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‘he shakes his fist at God …*’

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] See Lord how they sneer with scoffing, think they are so wise and tough, think they have no need of You,...
Cherry

Inside one of the bacteria that have a compass and a motor …

Machines, machines, machines galore: molecular machines to … Three-dimensional chemical complexity, beautiful structure, amazing activity!

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1392 of my comments have received 1433 Great Feedback votes

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Evocative. Reminds of

Posted on Mon, 12 Feb 2024

Evocative. Reminds of 'Sometimes I sits and thinks, and sometimes I just sits' which my mother was fond of quoting. Those without baths must find another haven for just stopping off gird if only for a few moments, like sleep. Clear the mind,...

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Posted in In the Bath

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Wow! so there's a lot of

Posted on Thu, 08 Feb 2024

Wow! so there's a lot of backstory and history here. I hope he's really left it behind, he still seems to know how to act hard. Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (11)

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Hopefully she will gradually

Posted on Wed, 07 Feb 2024

Hopefully she will gradually settle and find the surroundings and people interesting, and her memories of before becoming more hazy, she will become content and happy though maybe still feeling confused. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Home

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It would be better to own up

Posted on Wed, 07 Feb 2024

It would be better to own up to his boss, as he had intended straightening things out, I'd think. Leaving it it might look worse later if he was found out, and it would help for them to sort this forger out together? Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (10)

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The last two lines are lovely

Posted on Mon, 05 Feb 2024

The last two lines are lovely. But am I right in thinking this is an occasion of scattering ashes? Rhiannon

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Posted in We Watched from the Shore

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I like to think I think like

Posted on Sat, 03 Feb 2024

I like to think I think like a child, but, I'm always slow on riddles and puns. It was nice to see the simplicity seen by Joey, nice clue. And yes, the dialogue is very readable. Rhiannon

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Posted in "Unwanted Magic" 4

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I don't think I'd enjoy

Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2024

I don't think I'd enjoy visiting ancient buildings, espcially highly decorative, but can appreciate the work that has gone into them. I tend ot prefer ruins and open countryside!, but buildings give a guide to the history of the people. Nations (...

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Posted in The Gaddafi Effect

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I like having the chapters

Posted on Thu, 01 Feb 2024

I like having the chapters this legnth.Enough to absorb and doesn't need too long time commitment each time! Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (8)

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That's a perceptive comment,

Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024

That's a perceptive comment, and I guess it is why I love being drawn to notice these things that still are there to be seen, as you say honed down to the basic shape of the branches, tree trunks etc, and as the plant covering is less and weak,...

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Posted in January Skies

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This story must take a lot of

Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024

This story must take a lot of working out, to write each stage carefully, not rushed, patiently working forward at right pace. Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (7)

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