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I have 1919 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3044267 times and 573 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1391 of my 12,511 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1432 votes

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Waiting, wanting

Midnight chimes but hours of night still to come before … fresh …

Much more startling…

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] The shepherds saw a startling sight, but the sight they went to see – the little baby born that night they realised now was he who …
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“This night I will …”

“I’ll stay awake and keep so quiet and see them bring …
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Consequences of God becoming man

y oung ruler … Z acchaeus … the baby came and grew and then Jesus, the man, so cared that we may live anew …
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1391 of my comments have received 1432 Great Feedback votes

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People often seem to say that

Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023

People often seem to say that children enjoy a horror story. It might be so, but only really if they do know what to do with real panics and worries, and that there is a God in control and they can trust him. And therefore get a perspective on...

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Posted in Tempestuous Stirrings

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The last line says a lot.

Posted on Thu, 14 Sep 2023

The last line says a lot. Maybe best somewhere quite different! Rhiannon

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Posted in With Strange Feathers

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Thank you, Jenny. My husband

Posted on Thu, 14 Sep 2023

Thank you, Jenny. My husband has a real dislike to stcky feeling on things, so it's a point of fun with us to realise kids' enjoyment of it! Rhiannon

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Posted in Toddler Tea!

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Thank you, this is a totally

Posted on Sat, 09 Sep 2023

Thank you, this is a totally new one though. It is looking like rain here now too! Rhiannon

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Posted in Heatwave

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Very perceptive. When I was

Posted on Wed, 06 Sep 2023

Very perceptive. When I was young, I remember saying to my sister, that well, if it wasn't really fairies bringing money with the teeth (which I'd been told, presumably), then maybe Mum and Dad were 'Father Christmas'. She said, Yes, and I felt...

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Posted in The lies we tell our children

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Lovely! You draw the scene

Posted on Tue, 05 Sep 2023

Lovely! You draw the scene alive with its movement and smells. Rhiannon

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Posted in Another World

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You have used quite a few

Posted on Mon, 04 Sep 2023

You have used quite a few onomatopaeic words Jenny. I particularly liked 

collapses, lands with forceful thump; which being the end of the little section gives the real feeling of the shock and collapse! Rhiannon

 

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Posted in Stirring Forest

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I like the child's viewo of

Posted on Fri, 01 Sep 2023

I like the child's viewo of pioneering exploring through the tall weed 'jungle'. Was it up for the birds? Rhiannon

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Posted in The Curse of the Thing in the Jungle

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That sounds a bit complicated

Posted on Wed, 30 Aug 2023

That sounds a bit complicated too! But I guess what you mean is that a real Latin phrase might not really convey much to us from that past, or what it conveys will be always very limited, but all will appreciate a rest with that view to look at!...

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Posted in A riddle?

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You can share about an

Posted on Thu, 31 Aug 2023

You can share about an exciting, moving moment, but none can share it. Gone in an instant, but in your heart and brain, and to write about! Rhiannon

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Posted in The Hawk at Rejerrah

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