The Curse of the Thing in the Jungle
By Ed Crane
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Together John Woodard and me
followed a winding path sodden
with past rains. At either side dead
or dying flowers towered over our
innocent heads. Hearts accelerating
steadily as we pressed on. Flowers
gave way to giant shrubs bare from
past winters but thick enough to
block the light behind them. Ahead
a high wall of dense vegetation.
Pushing against soft damp leaves
we broke through to clear sky.
There it was, a shocking apparition.
A high sentinel black against grey.
Hanging from its crossbar on a
single strand the half-circle silhouette
motionless in the cold humid air.
Fear paralysing us as we gasped
at the terrible spectacle before
flight instinct sent us screaming
back along the jungle pathway.
Stopping only when we reached
the safe house. We looked around
happy nothing had chased us.
Suddenly our fear evaporated.
We were brave again. Retracing
our footsteps we crept forward
until again we reached the wall
of vegetation, pushing past the
broken leaves it was still there
the black outline less threatening
this time. Running back along the
path squealing and giggling faking
terror, rolling on the terrace of
the safe house laughing in fear’s
face. A third time we confronted
our imagined nemesis. Our fleeing
screams and giggles less intense.
Danger passed, the game was over.
In the warmth of the safe house
comforted by smiles and cocoa
John Woodard’s mum feigned
astonishment as we told of our
adventure. She never explained
about the old coconut shell
hanging from the pagoda down
at the bottom of the garden.
Maybe she thought our five-year
old minds wouldn’t comprehend.
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I like the child's viewo of
I like the child's viewo of pioneering exploring through the tall weed 'jungle'. Was it up for the birds? Rhiannon
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nothing quite like the
nothing quite like the overactive imagination of a small boy! When my youngest was about the same age, he and his friend came pelting back into the house with great looks of triumph on their muddy faces and some unidentified things in their little hands - 'Dinosaur bones!' they declared, and flung them onto the table. I didn't have the heart to say anything except agree, and we all looked at them in wonder
I wonder what The Thing was for?
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The wild imagination of
The wild imagination of childhood is precious; anything-everything-is believable to a child. I so enjoyed reading this with my Saturday morning cup of coffee, both brought a smile to my face.
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It takes a brave person to be
It takes a brave person to be five years old. A great adventure and a great poem.
And I love your drawing too!
Turlough
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It takes a brave person to be
It takes a brave person to be five years old. A great adventure and a great poem.
And I love your drawing too!
Turlough
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