Rain

Cherry

By skinner_jennifer

Sun, 23 Mar 2025
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Does rain fall like tears of rage?

Or hailstones most crystal clear?

Giving salvation from starvation,

While some struggle storm in fear?

 

Cloudburst on ocean's tidal waves

Succumbs to wax and wane of moon,

Occasionally forceful and aggressive;

At times expressing even flow a boon.

 

Let light showers descend more slowly,

Beneficial, helpful to both body and land;

Sufficient soaking for trees and flowers,

So may thrive in radiance where they stand.

 

Raindrops are a special paragon of wonder,

For this constant bond between sky and earth;

Lifting determined spirits in times of drought,

Expressing appreciation as we show our mirth.

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Submitted by Sooz006 on

*At times expressing even flow a boon.* This is a new one on me, I had to think about it. Isn't that what poetry's about, looking at the words and deriving meaning, be it yours or the poet's? I think this is saying....the ocean is violent, but it can bring harmony and advantage when it's calm. 

I reference Morecambe Bay a lot in my writing because I love the ocean on the other side, it's far more moody and dramatic than on our side in Barrow. 

Thank you for a lovely poem and for teaching me a new phrase. 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Sooz,

I was thinking the ocean can be calm and safe, then at other times  ruthless and dangerous. Yet the moon has such a great effect on the tide. 

I've never been to Marcambe Bay, but I too love the ocean, but feel a million miles away from it here in Wiltshire. I know it's not that far really, but these days i don't travel very well, so tend not to go too far. Just glad I had all my adventures while I was young...smiley

I appreciate you stopping by to read and thank you so much for your comment.

Jenny.

 

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

love the sound matching the meaning in : "Sufficient soaking"

and "thrive in radiance" is gorgeous.

Light showers do descend more slowly, they make me think of sky finger tips

wonderful to read a new poem from you, hope you are enjoying Spring time!

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Lovely to hear from you Di,

I think the one true magic about nature is that when it rains everything thrives. In spring and summer colours are richer after a shower too.

I like your idea of showers descending like sky finger tips. 

I couldn't resist this week's I. P. It really got me thinking of poetry again. I've been so involved in writing my story, that I've not had much time for poetry, so I'm glad you enjoyed this one.

Many thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by celticman on

rain is life. a few well-placed words can be too. 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Glad this poem worked for you Jack.

Always grateful for your feedback and thank you for reading.

Jenny.

 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Thank you for the cherries Editors. Always a pleasure to know a poem works.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I too liked the phrase, Sufficient soaking for trees and flowers and, as she said, it is rather onomatopoetic. Had to look up the spelling of that! But meant that it seems to sound a bit like the rain gently soaking in.

Like in life, we enjoy the gentle supply, but stormy troubles are hard. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Rhiannon,

I've never heard onomatopoetic before. The rain can be kind, but also cruel. I suppose that's the same with most things in life. But having rain is much more important than not having any at all.

Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts Rhiannon.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Rain in Africa is always welcome but this year we had a bit too much. Although I do think they get a lot of rain say in the (rain!) forests around cental Africa, the i.e closer to the equator.

All the best Jenny, you don't know what is enough until you know what is too much!

Nolan &

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Nolan,

the rain forest is a great example of how nature can flourish. That last line you wrote is very true. Flooding can be horrific when it gets out of hand. It makes me thankful that I live on a hill, although my last house flooded when we lived in town, it was horrendous as the water was rising, but thankfully it only reached the hallway and our furniture was safe. It turned out that drains were blocked, which was the cause. I wouldn't want to go through that episode ever again.

Much appreciate you reading and letting me know.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Schubert on

It's very easy to fall into the cliche trap when writing on a subject like this Jenny, but you've captured the essence very skilfully. A refreshing read, well written. 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Thank you so much for your encouraging comment Schubert. It was very kind of you to read and let me know your thoughts.

Many thanks again.

Jenny.