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My stories

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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 6.

Nash didn’t believe in ghosts until his good friend Max died—and then came back to torment him. He believed in patterns. And sometimes, a pattern had...
Cherry

Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 5

I am filled with hatred. And the pulsing itch of inevitability crawls under my skin. It starts before I reach the airport, before I’ve even zipped my...
Cherry

Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 4

I am filled with hatred. It’s my fire that burns inferno pretty. The Bernsteins gave me everything I wanted. I had a new room. It was as big as the...
Cherry

Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 3.

I am filled with hatred. My name is Travis Bernstein. I’m thirty years old. Not safe around children—or adults. I close my eyes, and memories haunt...
Cherry

Xion Island Carrier: Chapter 2

Detective Chief Inspector Silas Nash slipped into the passenger seat of the unmarked car and nodded at DI Molly Brown. ‘Brown.’ She looked at him in...
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93 of my comments have received 93 Great Feedback votes

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Sweetheart, you must talk to

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021

Sweetheart, you must talk to somebody.  Are you still at school? Talk to a sympathetic teacher or school counsellor. Ring Childline, or the Samaritans. Make an appointment and see your doctor. Most importantly, please speak to the counsellor you...

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Posted in How do you forgive a parent?

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Hello mate, good to read you

Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020

Hello mate, good to read you again.  Nothing less than I'd expect from you, you have those writer's eyes that never stop looking at the world, I think we all do, but you find more beauty than most. It's one of the things I've admired about your...

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Posted in La belleza

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 The water looks black, but

Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014

 The water looks black, but when you hold it the palms of your hands it’s completely clear....lovely.

You get all shivery, not just because the water’s so cold, but because you don’t know what’s down there. ...and again

Aunty Pearl...

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Posted in Chicken Eye in the Sky

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 had learnt that it paid..

Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2014

 had learnt that it paid...learned

she would not allow a word to slip from her lips.  Occasionally she might emit an involuntary sound, but she never spoke, and found a deep sense of comfort in this self-imposed silence. .. I knew a little...

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Posted in Just Visiting

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Jenny, I love your poetry ..

Posted on Sun, 09 Feb 2025

Jenny, I love your poetry .. but this is another level. Give me a sneak into somebody else's life, and I'm in heaven.

I also had a miserable time at school nd went to one reunion. So I got the nostalgia of this. 

Brilliant,...

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Posted in School Reunion

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Gorgeous, gorgeous writing.

Posted on Wed, 09 Apr 2025

Gorgeous, gorgeous writing.

And what a find. I went through a phase of leaving one of my books in strange places for people to read. Maybe if I'd bunged a fiver in there, somebody would have done, before they turned to mulch on the forest...

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Posted in Nihil Impossibile Erit Vobis

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I never thought about it

Posted on Tue, 25 Feb 2025

I never thought about it before, but as we get older, instead of thinking about old bones and time slipping, we should focus on the greater wealth of music we've enjoyed over the yearsand have over youth. 

Beautiful, Jenny. 

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Posted in In Twilight Years

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These chapters are so

Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2025

These chapters are so different from the pub crowd, and I can't decide which I prefer; they are all brilliant, and that stark contrast between the two is going to make a brilliant book. 

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Posted in Steelie 14

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*At times expressing even

Posted on Sun, 23 Mar 2025

*At times expressing even flow a boon.* This is a new one on me, I had to think about it. Isn't that what poetry's about, looking at the words and deriving meaning, be it yours or the poet's? I think this is saying....the ocean is violent, but it...

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Posted in Rain

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Now that would have been a

Posted on Thu, 13 Mar 2025

Now that would have been a neat trick, I should have made it horribly carsick. Thanks Celt.

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Posted in The Book: Chapter 32

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