I miss you
By magicdarer
Sun, 02 Sep 2012
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Your soft steps
My house is empty
Full of things
You are gone
Your bright eyes
My bed is empty
Full of me
You have left
Your tooth smile
My arms are empty
Full of air
You are not there
Your inner comedienne
My eyes are empty
Full of sadness
Where are you now
Your passionate warmth
My heart is empty
Full of memory
I will miss you
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This is a very nicely
This is a very nicely expressed poem and I like the repetitive structure of the piece.
A simple statement expressed in a simple form seems to be the perfect combination.
Much enjoyed
Moya
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