He made couches out of commas
By span
Thu, 14 Feb 2008
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He made couches out of commas
The boy in the book
fucked his fist out,
took to making letter lists
sleep slicked himself with digits
and cubed bits and centimetres and pixels
and the scrits of kerf that lolled off the cover lip.
He knee waded deep to the pylon spine
and grout gripped as the arms all Ceilidh made moving,
the fist that fucked him, a footnote.
The scapula smuck of edit
got him at the edge of that Blackpool Penelope,
always he’d seen a signpost to the common,
but actually it turned out was a death wedge
of more story coming.
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Wow. I want to read this
Wow. I want to read this forever. The rhythm of the words and sounds is mesmerising. Each time I read it different words are popping out of the page. Superb.
Ax
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Great imagery. I had a look
Great imagery. I had a look at some of your other submissions. I like how you refer to the writing process and the way you push non-linear language to the limit.
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