I have only these hands
By darkenwolf
Sat, 21 Aug 2010
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I have only these hands,
Hands that worked the dark earth,
Hands that held the kicking gun fast,
Hands from which blood can never be cleansed.
I have only these hands,
Hands that worked pen and pencil,
With fingers that danced a keyboard,
That moulded and shaped words.
And these hands have held you,
These hands have caressed you,
These hands have protected you,
These hands that could never harm you.
I have only these hands to offer you.
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Darkenwolf you write with
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Darkenwolf you write with such feeling.
Your hands and your fingers are your gift.
Jenny.
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I really enjoyed this, I
I really enjoyed this, I think the repetition works really well!
Beeme xx
k.
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I like the simplicity of
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I like the simplicity of this Darkenwolf
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Yes I agree with Jenny- you
Yes I agree with Jenny- you write with such feeling ;) well done
pia
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