to you, for now

By fluffeu

Fri, 03 Sep 2010
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you were just here
you were here

why have you been gone so long

you would like me now
like me more than you did before

we'd have so much to talk about
and we would be better

your smile and your blue eyes
are so much clearer in pictures now

you are so beautiful

artists are so snobbish
and the service... well - it has really gone down
since the last time you were here

i have tapped into my creativity
really
see... see what i've done

where are you

and isn't it time you came back
don't you want one of my hugs
don't you want the latest gossip

snippets
of what i would say
you were so beautiful

Certificate PG
Poem
Sudden Poetry
Journal

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I like the sense of desperation in this - you've used very simple language, but it works

 

Submitted by fluffeu on
thank you! I haven't written poetry in a very long time - I think I'm trying to find my style again, or perhaps redefine?

Submitted by gingeresque on
you just made me cry at the office reading this.

Submitted by fluffeu on
No! I'm sorry! xx

Submitted by gingeresque on
you said exactly what i wanted to say and what i've been thinking about and the part about her being beautiful... ok i have to go hide in the bathroom now this is ridiculous.