Empty Palette
By lenchenelf
Thu, 02 Dec 2010
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I can recall, but not revisit travail of childbirth,
wince at remembered abscess or broken bone,
or pump a well of personal grief and despair,
it never runs dry.
Not one of these aches lends me right to speak with your voice,
to weep through your blindfold, keen out your pain
muffled through arid, choking cloth, betrayed by humanity,
as the first stone is cast.
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ed.16.12.10
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As is usual with your
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
As is usual with your poetry, not a single word is wasted here in its writing; each one in its turn, adding another piece that makes the whole. Much enjoyed;-)
Tina
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I think the title's a good
I think the title's a good one. It's very effective - as Tina says, not a word wasted.
Rob
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Yes I can see what you mean.
Yes I can see what you mean. I think you chose right in the end.
Rob
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