Last Night
By Dark Fox
Sat, 19 Mar 2011
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Last night, we fought again.
I don’t even remember what about.
We said some terrible things to each other and I might have slapped you.
You punched the wall and told me I was being stupid as usual.
I shouted, yelled and slammed the door.
You followed and bellowed like a bull at me.
I blocked my ears to keep it out.
We roared at each other.
We told each other, we were not in love.
But it was all lies and fear.
We made up a couple of hours later.
We kissed, hugged and sobbed.
Then we headed for the bedroom to make up.
Last night ended in the best way possible.
.....I do love you.
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A poem...written from the
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
A poem...written from the heart, if ever there was one;-)
Tina
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Hi Dark Fox, I like it when
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Dark Fox,
I like it when poems have happy endings.
Nice one.
Jenny.
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new Dark Fox Good poem I am
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Dark Fox
Good poem I am terrible for happy endings too.
But you have done this well.
Couple in paper because of so many splitting up,
and before they got married went around the world
motor-bike, asking and finding out all ages and years
to-gether what they did, and how last etc. Before get
married. Answer good forget before one goes of to sleep, have a kiss and a cuddle, new day next day.
julie x
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Such a real poem, I like it
Such a real poem, I like it and your last comment good advice me too :) K
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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New Dark Fox What you say is
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Dark Fox
What you say is very true.
But doesn't work if want say
something before bed.
Yep have to empty oneself
julie x.
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