ONE VOICE ( I . P. )

By skinner_jennifer

Tue, 14 Jun 2011
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10 comments
 

Melodious harmonies echo
rising high into the dome
inspiring...uplifting me,

note for note flawless...
sweet - sounding with
colourful tones,

the aromatic fragrance of
incense adds to the mood
painting an atmosphere,

aesthetic sounds...
created from voice alone
Mediaeval Angels chant,

they beat out their rhythm,
hypnotic sounds invisibly -
coil...intertwine through air,

sounds that take me
to another place...
another time.

Certificate PG
Poem
Poems
Spiritual

Comments

Submitted by mcscraic on
This transcends like incense to the ears of God

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Hi there, Jenny. This is a lovely take on the I.P. Just a tiny point, I think you mean 'melodious' in the first line. I like this stanza, especially:- "they beat out their rhythm, hypnotic sounds invisibly - coil...intertwine through air..." Just beautiful;-) Tina

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hello mcscraic, that's a wonderful way to look at this poem. Thankyou for reading and letting me know. Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Tina, yes you're right about that word, so I've put it right. I'm glad you could capture the spirit of those lines, because the music really does that to me. thankyou so much for letting me know and reading, ofcourse and the help, always much appreciated. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
This poem made me think of a place for meditating. A great one for the IP Jenny. Very atmospheric indeed. ;)Pia

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Thanks so much Pia, I was listening to the Mediaeval Babes today, and this kind of came into my head. They are a french group of girls and they sing like Angels, simply beautiful. I'm glad you liked it and thankyou for telling me. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new skinner_jennifer Really enjoyed this. Incense and angel's very angelic. Uplifting to me, I feel sleepy already. Only joking. Reminds of year's at church and incense used at some, not been over 6 months. Well who cares now, some priests did all for me moved on different. I am busy doing something or having long lay in.Used to be so busy there, in helping it was great. Now no one notifies anyone even if sick? Peculiar world. Quiet music no words yes, is so relaxing. Or tapes. Lines Sounds that take me to another place.. another time. yes, I too say good poem for the (IP) julie xx

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi julie, thankyou so much for your long newsy comment. You know my theory is, that you really need to look after yourself before you can think of others, because if your energy is not there, then you cannot be there for others, if you know what I mean. I really do love to listen to beautiful angelic voices, it relaxes me so much, also love to meditate with incense. I'm really glad that you could capture the essence of this piece, and thankyou so much for letting me know. Hope you have a great and peaceful weekend. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Music can do a lot right :) lovely poem K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Kahdai, yes music certainly can do a lot, where would we be without it? I find music always uplifts and inspires me, no matter how I feel. It also conjures up feelings of the past, another great reason for having music. Glad you liked this poem and thankyou for letting me know. Jenny.