How is this so wrong.

By prettyrose

Sun, 20 Nov 2011
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5 comments
 

While your last kiss still
Spreads a burning fire all
Through my contented body,
I ach for more.

Even though I know it feels
So right and Enriches my lonely
Dull life, I cry with a guilty
Pain, but are still longing for
This pleasure with another.

Your natural touch feels like
Smooth silk,slowly caressing
Every inch of my willing body.
When you speak its with actions
Not words of wasted time.

You smile, and my heart shines
Desire,desperate to
Merge body and soul once more,
Even If that moment was our last
Complete Wholeness of meaning and pure
Ecstasy Of Happiness.

Certificate 15
Adult Love :) Stories/Poems
Love

Comments

Submitted by Savx on
Oh, I really like this one! I really adore your work! Savannah

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Submitted by prettyrose on
Hi Savannah, thank you so much 4 ur lovely comment and takign the time 2 read my work it means alot. And I love your nameS :))))) take care and thank you again you have made me smile, with your comment as I know I am not the best writer lol. keep writing Keep Smiling :))))

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Prettyrose Hi! Just loved all this, certainly made,my heart feel good and jump! If only romance never died. But it is the ingredients, that make a cake well. Like a poem or story I suppose. "if music be the food of love then play on". I love romance books,and films,and songs, end up weeping. Silly even if seen film before. "wuthering Heights". "Dr. Chivago" The end come up in cinemas then when young,be sitting tears rolling down,waiting more! but it was the end. Don't see many people out and young,holding hands,or arms round each other,or hugs! now, odd one or to kissing. Make a difference all the world wouldn't it. Hope your bit brighter. Sending hug! x cavalcaderl julie xx

Submitted by prettyrose on
Hi Julie :) Thank you firstly for your lovely comments always makes me appreciate how really lucky I am 2 have people like yourself reading my work, nevermind commenting. I agree, it's as if the real meaning of a connection and love is meeting, going to bed and then parting after 2 or 3 years, not the giggles when walking hand in hand for all the world to see, as if you only just met, yet but its really15 years down the line, or the long courtship before the greedy mr/miss lust over powers romance. Shame, I feel if we had the times back like the lovely feels like, on moonlight bay, doris day e.t.c. I hope you not 2 bad :))) take care Keep writing Keep Smiling:))))

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx