The Darkness
By 12YearOldWriter
Sat, 17 Dec 2011
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You think you see the darkness,
But you seem to look in the wrong direction.
When you are around you’re ‘darkness’, you try to be cautious.
But you should be cautious always,
Because the darkness is always around you, whether in plain sigh or hidden in alleys.
The darkness will consume you, from the inside out.
It comes out your nose, your eyes, your mouth.
It affects all around you,
And I hope you can see,
That the darkness is in everyone, in you, in me.
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12yearold, you catch me when
12yearold, you catch me when I am going to bed. On a quick glance this seems like a sequel to your previous post and equally as good. I will read tomorrow and provide some proper feedback.
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I like how you describe the
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
I like how you describe the darkness in this poem,
in a very poetic way.
Jenny.
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This is different... But I
This is different... But I like it =) It's as if I can almost imagine that darkness right now. Nice post =)
Savannah
Sav
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P.S., it also kind of
P.S., it also kind of creeped me out a little, too, towards the end, because it seems eery. It is still very good, though.
Savannah
Sav
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