it
By alphadog1
Fri, 23 Dec 2011
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3 comments
padding silently,
so dark brown its almost black as night;
with its feelers outstretched,
every step is cautious careful delicate.
Then it waits...
before moving rhythmically once more.
Everything it does has purpose,
the wait, the tapping as it tenderly traps.
Its my voice that gives it movement.
while reading and pondering Lawrence's "snake",
I sense a subtle similarity;
as I feel it looking down,
and sense it crawling through my hair,
leaving icy ripples down my back;
I can feel it waiting
for me to conclude...
and so carefully... leave the room.
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I like this Alphadog and I
I like this Alphadog and I don't even know why! Haunting and frightening. I read it last night late on and had to come back for seconds. Thanks and merry Christmas.
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Yes a bit creepy- I thought
Yes a bit creepy- I thought of a spider- very well written...
;)Pia
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