tweets
By alphadog1
Sat, 14 Jan 2012
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Our eyes meet...
and whispered hints
of reflected connections,
that delicately linger.
she smiles...
dare I admit how I feel...?
everything is in her eyes;
from heady weighted desire,
To a distant echo longing,
In whose radiance I ache to burn.
heady sweaty climbs...
drifting together
Our bodies entwine;
pulses quicken
our lips slip sips
of moist expectation
and desire erupts...
yet with a whisper she waits
and with a subtle blush she hints,
sadly leaving...
with a smile shining in her
naked eye.
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Oooh, bit naughty! Great
Oooh, bit naughty! Great ending phrase, 'naked eye'! Think you need to reconsider your capital letters, though - the lower case and upper case line starts don't seem to follow the punctuation...
J x
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Know the feeling! Oh, to
Know the feeling! Oh, to have more time in which to think creatively!
J x
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