The Day That Love Was Banned
By sonora
Wed, 15 Feb 2012
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The day that love was banned I packed my things,
That debris of my life, into a case
And headed for the coast – some other place
To hide all hope and joy under the wings
Of hawks. Whilst handsaws sliced the souls of kings
In half, machines of less-than-loving grace
Disfigured poetry and brought the face
Of beauty deep beneath, where no bird sings.
But birdsong broke then far along the beach:
Her footsteps, muffled by the surf and sand,
Still boomed like drumbeats just within the reach
Of outstretched arms. She stopped, and took my hand,
Then climbed the cliffs and sat us down to teach
Our hearts to soar, the day that love was banned.
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I like the way you've woven
Permalink Submitted by blighters rock on
I like the way you've woven the renewal of love in the same day as when love was banned.
I totally forgot that it was Valentine's Day this week so I'm probably the most depressing person on the site by a long chalk for putting this theme forward as IP, but you've done it justice here, Sonora, as did your poem of last week.
All the best
Richard
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Hi Russell, The pleasure's
Permalink Submitted by blighters rock on
Hi Russell,
The pleasure's all mine. That's a good little website too.
You and your associates should take a look at Stan the Man's latest stories. Perfect for comedians and pot smoking poets.
All the best
Richard
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