Blink

By pasameerday

Thu, 30 May 2013
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Blink. I dare you.
Spend one half of one second with your eyes completely shut.
Do it.
If for no other reason than your eyes are getting dry.
Go on.
Blink.

The darkness will suck everything in.

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Submitted by adbates on
At first, I found this poem quite humorous because I thought you took something wry simple that people aren't typically afraid of and you successfully made it sound like blinking was scary. Then, at the last line, I realized blinking IS scary. Congratulations on a job well done!

 

Submitted by pasameerday on
Thank you, it really means a lot to me that people comment on my work - I'm only 14 so I have a lot of improving to do, and having people comment, even just one, kind of brings up my confidence a little. Thank you ^_^ -pasameerday

-pasameerday