a short angry poem at 2:56am
By wet_towels
Sat, 07 Dec 2013
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You came home and punched the wall
and cursed
because you are so fed up with
the girls and the boys
playing musical hearts
and you are always left
without a seat
and how could it be
You asked
that the girl you've had your eyes on
never looks back
and the feelings you hate
keep coming back
and seem to never leave.
And all I could do was listen
to you
and look
though you never look back.
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Great. Loved the end.
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Great. Loved the end.
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I liked this very much, and
I liked this very much, and like Catherine, thought the end was so good. The only thing I wondered about was 'left without a seat'. As the game is 'musical heats', which I thought was great, could he be left without something to do with hearts, perhaps - left without a beat? Only a suggestion...
Bee
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