The haven
By alphadog1
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The old men sit silently silver
With toothless slackjaw grins.
While the air
-Controlled and conditioned-
hums into the room
from above.
Silence comes from these dry mouths:
false prophets of the age to come;
While slapped footfalls rule,
behind the occasional dissent
of trousered thigh
That is rustling by
Just to be heard in the silence.
The yellow artificial lights stains the skin,
while magazines are occasionally held up
in a position of artificial defence
protecting the seemed sacred space
that exists
between those who sit around
severed apart by cultural ideology.
All the wile, the lines at the window
Are distorting the beautiful view outside;
These lines appear as scars, bloody bars
within a room that belies freedom
In fact an open prison with an open door
that is paid for with a kiss.
©adh 2014
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awfully beautiful! i was
awfully beautiful! i was particularly moved by the last few lines
"These lines appear as scars, bloody bars
within a room that belies freedom"
struck me as particularly well rythmed!
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paid for with a kiss.
paid for with a kiss.
I like that, alphadog1. Good one.
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