Gamble
By Anchor
Fri, 02 May 2014
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3 comments
he smiles sex and she drinks it in
green eyes, feline, nicholson.
lips stretched across freckled skin,
and it's got her wondering
heat quivers the air outside
and sweat breaks on his muscled back
straight-out-of-hollywood
a slow-motion cliché
and worse still, it goes deeper than that
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Love the short and swet of it
Permalink Submitted by hudsonmoon on
Love the short and swet of it, Anke.
Rich
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Intersting. But, wondering
Permalink Submitted by God'sPoeticChild on
Interesting. But, wondering what? I was reading it thinking it was more to it. You should add more. It's nice made me wonder too.
Taris
God's Poetic Child
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Very succinct, and very
Permalink Submitted by David Kirtley on
Very succinct, and very effective. I like it.
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