Creation

By Itane Vero

Fri, 12 Dec 2014
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When it all breaks down. The nights,

the walls, the spectacle, the future,

 

the good intentions. When this all is

in tatters, is it indeed in pieces? When

 

you look better it forms again. It adds

up. The words, the ideas. Like a poem.

 

Angels, devils, laughs, fights, you, me.

 

Do we live. By the grace of originality.

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Comments

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

This is beautiful and real. When things are down we lose perspective then it all comes back into shape when we look and feel better. Good use of 'originality' as the final word, the uplifting belief that we all have creativity within us and this will save us personally and globally.

Submitted by Itane Vero on

Thanks for your remarks!

Itane