Luck (part I)
By Jake76
Sat, 31 Jan 2015
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Jake woke up after a light nudge from Lucy. Lucy was blonde like Jake medium height also like Jake. "Thanks for waking me up" smiled Jake with his white teeth , "hmm" Lucy replied she pointed to the board. "How much have I missed" ? Asked Jake. "You can copy my notes but don't let bald head see". Bald head was a nickname for the chemistry teacher of Sunraven Secondnary school.
Bald head was sat at his desk. Lucy and James sat next to each other at the back of the class away from Baldhead. Jake looked out the window to his right he thought he saw something move. "You okay" ? Asked Lucy "Yeah course" replied Jake trying to look away from the window "thought I saw something" Jake said. Jake was now trying to concentrate for the remaining 30 mins of the lesson.
"Ahh" Jake moaned lightly looking into Lucy's eyes. "You don't like it"? Laughed Lucy. "I do but I wasn't expecting you to" , "you to what" ? Interrupted Lucy , "Touch me down there". "Well you like it" grinned Lucy.
Jake looked at the clock almost sweating there was 20 minutes left Lucy had been touching him for almost 10 minutes he didn't know if he could last any longer. Jakes pen dropped.
" I see the boy , he's looked out the window a few times " , an angry voice came over the radio " you know what to do"!
The man in all black had been on a roof facing the science lab and saw everything Jake was doing through his scope. He made sure Jake was person in the photo he had been assigned to eliminate.
He had 3 bullets lined up the others had been knocked off due to the wind however he was too focused on Jake to notice. " Arghh no " ! The man realised his remaining bullets were knocked off the roofs edge.
The man in all black aimed for Jakes head. " let's get a headshot " he smiled with his yellow teeth.
Jake didn't know whether to smile laugh or even touch Lucy back. He smiled looking at Lucy from time to time. Jake was surprised at what was going on as Lucy was a very good girl. So he thought.
Jake needed an excuse of some sort to remove Lucy's hand. In the dullest attempt he gestured to his pen and leant over his stool to get it.
A bullet whizzed though the window narrowly missing Jake and pierced into Lucy's left shoulder. Lucy slumped down her chair in extreme pain. Jake was stunned , a second bullet pierced thorough his plastic chair he soon realised this wasn't a dream. " Get down everyone now " ! Jake screamed. Jake crawled to Lucy and pulled her close the window. Bald head had other plans and led the race out the Classroom. The two bodies remaining in the class were the bodies of James and Lucy.
Lucy barely conscious was being pulled to the front of the class. Jake had a plan to get him and Lucy out alive.
A lot of things were going through Jakes mind , who would do this ? Why Lucy , Is this it , where is everybody.
Jake left Lucy at the front of the class just below the window. As Jake was moving to the back of the class Lucy mumbled " Jake don't leave me" Jake stopped Lucy from getting up and said "Trust me" kissing Lucy on the cheek. Jake had never liked the colour red and there was a lot of it on the left side of Lucy' once white shirt.
Jake after what felt like an hour and crawled to the back of the class. Glass had cut his hand and knee caps but he wasn't going to complain as Lucy was in much more pain. He pulled the blind down at the back of the glass trying to confuse who ever was shot the previous two bullets.
Jake covered his head and was surprised when not a single bullet fizzed into the deserted class.
" One bullet left it's all I need anyway to kill that blonde shit " ! Screamed the man in all black.
Jake managed to crawl to Lucy. " Lucy listen here's the plan " , " It hurts interrupted Lucy " !.
" when I say now hold on to me"
"Now" !
Jake crawled with Lucy attached to him he feared a bullet would hit him or even Lucy.
Surprisingly the classroom was quiet the only sound was from a buzzing bee trying to fly through the window at the front of the class .
Jake took a quick daring peek behind him he saw Bald heads I phone on the desk behind him. He immediately snatched the phone off the coffee stained desk.
" You can run but you can't hide"! The man in all black said almost laughing scanning the classroom for the slightest movement.
Jake didn't even attempt to type in bald heads pass word he , tapped the emergency call button. " Yes armed police now " ! "Sunraven school"
Jake took of his tie and hooked it around the door handle. He yanked it open and grabbing Lucy and stormed Out the class leaving his blazer and bag in the class. Surprisingly no shot.
Most if not everyone was outside the school. Jake went behind the building
With Lucy. Two men dressed in police uniformed eyed Jake. " I didn't do this I swear" Jake said backing off to the brick wall. One of the officers threw Jake onto the ground knocking him out cold.
Jake regained consciousness he was pushed into a black van. There was no sign of the police officers. A man at the back of the van told him to look down. Jake looked down almost crying. " What's going on " ? " I haven't done anything" begged Jake.
Jake was not getting a response he clenched his fist and swung a punch at the suited mans head catching him off guard. Jake stood up only to be knocked down by the suited man somehow the suited man reversed Jakes ambitious attack and laughed. Jake looked into the suited mans eyes and knew what was coming.
Jake had been punched so hard he hit the other side of the van and feel to the ground.
Jake woke up when he was forced onto his feet which he could barely feel in the cold. He was only in a short sleeved shirt. Most the buttons popped off.
Jakes eyes were struck by the bright light. The the van had tinted windows and the light outside had stunned him.
Jake could barely breathe the suited man yanked shirt upwards forcing him into a bulky building. "Where's Lucy ? " Jake pleaded
Jake was new to London however he knew what the M.I5 building looked like.
Jake was confused , very confused.
The suited men put a sack over Jakes blonde head. Jake minutes later was pushed into a dark room. The sack was removed.
Jake was alone. So he thought. " Anyone here " ? Jake asked. "Sit down " a voice came from somewhere within the room. The lights turned on and Jake was surprised and what he saw. "Lucy's mum in m.i5" He whispered to himself.
" Jake I'm going to be very honest" said Jessica also known as Lucy's mum. " I sent that sniper to eliminate you , and I think you know why".
" you know too much about me and this origination to be alive". Said Jessica. " I have cameras all over my house and I saw you go in my attic "
1 week earlier ....
Jake was new to Sunraven. He was nervous very nervous and it was showing. " Hey I'll look after you don't worry Hun " said Lucy. "Thanks I'm finding it really hard here " replied Jake with a smile. " what do you find hard here" asked Lucy " well the work it's " before Jake could finish the bips went it was 3:15 everyone stormed out the class. School was finished.
Lucy eyed James. Almost starring at him " You can come mine and revise my mums hardly ever in" smiled Lucy
" erm yeah sure my foster mum wouldn't mind" Jake replied.
Jake and Lucy had arrived at Lucy's house. It was warm and quite big. " Very nice house " Jake said looking around. " it's boring you know being here alone everyday revising alone" Lucy said coming closer to Jake.
" what do we have here" a deep voice said looking through the living room door. " Just revising " Lucy said Jake was ready to get beaten up by Lucy's mental bother. Lucy had shown Jake some bruises her brother Tom and caused. " you upstairs" Tom pointed to Jake " ye ye yeah course "Jake said nodding very nervously
Lucy held her head in her hands walking up the stairs. Jake watched her go and caught a glimpse of her nickers.
Tom slapped Jake making his cheek go pink. " why are you here " ? Asked Tom . " To revise nothing more " replied Jake holding his cheek. Tom held Jake by his throat whilst he searched thorough his pockets. Jake knew where this was going. Jake always kept a condom on him as he was very keen to lose his virginity. Tom pulled the condom out of Jakes pocket. Jake tensed his stomach. " Tom looked into Jakes watery eyes " what is this" ? " someone put it in there it isn't mine " begged Jake
Jake was on the wooden surface being kicked and stamped on against the wall. " I want you out before I get back " Tom yelled. Tom left dressed in a tracksuit.
" Lucy you up there " Jake said
Jake got no reply and started looking for Lucy upstairs. Jake saw the stairs to the attic the flap was opened. He overhead Lucy speaking to Jessica.
" Mum jakes a nice guy , no he doesn't know about our family's secrets ". Said Lucy
Lucy stopped speaking and Jake stormed up the attic. He eyed Lucy
" what did you hear " ! " Lucy pushed a button and the attic flap closed. " I didn't hear anything "Jake said. Lucy had made a very big mistake she typed the pin to get into the attic but forgot to close it behind her. There were files everywhere labeled m.i5 and top Secret. " I thought this was only in movies". Smiled Jake "Jake leave now before Tom knows you were in here" begged Lucy .
Back in the m.i5 room Jake was in tears. " So you're gonna have to kill me " ? Asked Jake with his head on the table.
Jessica had her hands behind her back and moved closer to Jake.
To be continued ...
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I love that you are writing this Jake. There's action, feeling, conflict and a little bit of very tactful sensuality. I know that you are commited to this and good on you for it, see it through until the end and when it's finished enjoy the moment.
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Pacey and full of suspense.
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Pacey and full of suspense.
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